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Real name: alia
Member Since: 08/05/2009
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Reviews by dancing_donut
Logan and Rogue, chaos and order, misery and happiness.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 24504 - Hits: 72170
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/06/2007 - Last Updated: 10/06/2007
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star half star
Date: 02/19/2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Arrow of Time

I feel sad on Marie's behalf. Maybe because I want things to go smoothly for her.

"Don’t ever change, Wolverine."

Rated: R
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1285 - Hits: 2297
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/13/2007 - Last Updated: 10/13/2007
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star
Date: 10/03/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is actually kinda sad. poor Marie.

She can't help but wonder what she ever did to make him love
her enough to try so hard.

Rated: Mature
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 6280 - Hits: 2768
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/17/2007 - Last Updated: 11/17/2007
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/11/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just love the emotions playing out between those two. All those what happened has finally been answered/

Thank you for a great story.

“I can melt the clock hands down, but only in my memory / Nobody gets the second chance to be the friend that they meant to be.”

Rated: R
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Holiday
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3667 - Hits: 1454
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/28/2007 - Last Updated: 11/28/2007
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/30/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Kinda sad when you think about it. Marie and Logan being together but not in love with each other in the end.

Rogue is hiding and Wolverine being Wolverine, goes to find out why.

Rated: R
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Friendship
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3961 - Hits: 2768
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/23/2008 - Last Updated: 01/23/2008
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/12/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Pop your claws..."

I held up a fist and let 'em out.

She held onto my fist, gloved fingers running over the ripples of claw under skin.

"Now... rip off your testicles."

BEST LINES EVER!

“Marie… I need help.”

Rated: R
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 10348 - Hits: 51947
Complete?: No - Published: 01/29/2008 - Last Updated: 03/02/2010
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/15/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That's it?

come on Rogue should be more pissed at Logan.

Anyway, I enjoy reading this story very much. Here's hoping you'll continue it.

Just a little fluff, mixed with a bit of post-Valentine's-Day angst.

Rated: PG
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4503 - Hits: 4030
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/22/2008 - Last Updated: 02/22/2008
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: As Sweet As Damask Roses

marie-ko. mariko.

genius. love this.

In the great tradition of AU and What If?, a variation on a theme. Meeting, check. Bar, check. Running away, check. But at a very different time in life.

Rated: Mature
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Adult
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 8663 - Hits: 10887
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/01/2008 - Last Updated: 03/03/2008
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Slow Train Coming Remix

So okay I have a question
Did they meet before? because the 10 years line is confusing me right now.

What's inside matters the most.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: AU, X1
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1751 - Hits: 2399
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/13/2008 - Last Updated: 06/13/2008
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/15/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wish I had my own Logan

Logan makes a mistake.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 328 - Hits: 2341
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/17/2008 - Last Updated: 11/17/2008
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed
Date: 12/22/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Simple Mistakes

Is it Jean's name?

Logan is dealing with Jean's death and Marie is the one person he calls.

Finished!

Rated: R
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Foof, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 26302 - Hits: 93676
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/24/2009 - Last Updated: 05/17/2010
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 05/18/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Last Call

*HUG YOUU*

Thank you thank you thank you! This is so wonderful. I'm glad they cleared the air and they talked.

And Logan for once knew that Rogue's in love with him.

Author's Response: I\'m thrilled that you loved it. I was soooo worried about their heart to heart. I was afraid that Logan\'s emotions didn\'t come across in it. I was afraid that it would seem stilted in conversation inseat of the raw resigned emotion that he felt. I was anxious that he wouldn\'t come across as just a guy who knew that he\'s screwed up and had this chance to explain everything out, but was more than massively afraid that she wouldn\'t understand. So, thanks for loving it. If you\'d like to expound further on.. anything, send me a message, ok?\r\n

Somewhat ambiguous sex.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1288 - Hits: 2895
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/16/2009 - Last Updated: 02/16/2009
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/07/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Touched

huh. Scott and Logan.

I think it's Logan.

TWO WORDS: SHOWER SCENE.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4030 - Hits: 6696
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/04/2009 - Last Updated: 03/04/2009
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/22/2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Rock and a Hard Place

BUSTED! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Scott gets the greatest lines in here.

Rogue reflects on life after Jean Grey’s death and the relationships she has with the people around her, especially with Logan. She knows she has to make a choice: take responsibility for her own life or give in and let go.

Part one in the Law of Life series: “Change is the law of life. And those who look only to the past or present are certain to miss the future.” (John F. Kennedy) Rogue narrates this story about the changes her life undergoes as she matures from ages eighteen to twenty-two. The world’s view of the mutant community, the responsibilities she has to the X-Men, and the interactions she has with the people around her are all essential parts of the story. It is her evolving bond with Logan, however, that remains the focal point throughout.

Rated: PG-13
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Friendship
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: Law of Life
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 18605 - Hits: 39847
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/08/2009 - Last Updated: 04/08/2009
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/06/2009 Title: Chapter 8: Know Your Rights

I read this story 4 times now and this is the first time that I have the urge to left you a comment. I read this whenever I feel like my life is not going to the direction that I want it to. I learned a lot by reading it. How Rogue is determined to shed the immature image. How she realized that we’re the only one who could shape ourselves and the only one to do something in order to get what we need in our life. No one else would help us. We help ourselves.

The first time I read the story, I felt an instant connection with the way Rogue is evolving to be from teenager to adult. I had my fair shares of mistakes and I realize so does Rogue. The difference between me and her is that she learned from her mistake the first time around. It took me awhile to get the message and change my way.

And her not believing in hope anymore is something that I understand. From time to time, even if I’m not hoping for something anymore, I just really wanted someone to prove me wrong. But it didn’t happen yet. And I really want to have someone like Kurt. A friend that I could talk to without them being judgmental.
The whole concept of observing others and copy their fine traits is something that I approved of.
So there. I know this is not a constructive criticism but I just feel the need to thank you for producing such a wonderful story that somehow I can relate to.

Author's Response: Wow. All I can say is that I\'m so touched by this feedback. I\'m so pleased you could relate and that it makes you think. There\'s really no other reason to write. Thank you so much.

retired featured story Logan runs. Rogue goes with him and wears leather.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 12551 - Hits: 11090
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/11/2009 - Last Updated: 05/11/2009
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/19/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I cried in the end.

What would happen if the X-men saw X1?

Rated: PG-13
Categories: Comicverse
Characters: None
Genres: Foof, Humor
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5952 - Hits: 5696
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/12/2009 - Last Updated: 10/12/2009
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/01/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Movie Night

OMG! I freaking love this! Logan should be aware that he always cry at the end of every x-men movies though.

Author's Response: heh heh, thank you for reminding me. the next movie i\'ll be sure to point that out. esp. how he blubbers with that stupid cracking voice in the Blackbird after Jean \"dies\"

Because who HASN'T had a sex dream about Logan? Come on.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 5893 - Hits: 24823
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/29/2009 - Last Updated: 12/08/2009
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/22/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh damn! I indeed am jealous of Rogue. I'd give up food in order to have that kind of wet dreams!

One more year, sugar. We’ll be free.

Rated: R
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Drabble
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 424 - Hits: 2765
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/01/2009 - Last Updated: 12/01/2009
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/22/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Reading this feels like a jolt of electric surging through my vein. Very nice.

Bravo!

Rogue gets a bad grade and someone is going to pay

Rated: NC-17
Categories: AU
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Adult, PWP, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 9013 - Hits: 21178
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/10/2009 - Last Updated: 12/12/2009
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/21/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

YESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE ROGUE SHOWING LOGAN WHO THE BOSS IS!
About time someone kick his ass.

Logan has the perfect Christmas present for Marie

Rated: G
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Foof
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 374 - Hits: 1923
Complete?: Yes - Published: 12/22/2009 - Last Updated: 12/22/2009
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I know it's not Christmas anymore. But, I feel all happy inside :)

Author's Response: Well if it helps I\'ll watch White Christmas any time of year. Glad to know I can spread the happy as well as sad.

Logan comes home to a letter

Rated: PG
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 539 - Hits: 2035
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/08/2010 - Last Updated: 02/08/2010
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/13/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I cried and I tell you where the tears started to gather -

this lines - "If you ever need to be close to me, find them and tell them one. I'll be behind you, smiling."

Bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks glad you liked it.

"He came to me the night she died. That's what he always did."

On Hiatus.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11
Wordcount: 14065 - Hits: 67179
Complete?: No - Published: 02/17/2010 - Last Updated: 05/18/2010
Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/21/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Sorry

That's so good I can't wait for another one.

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m now working on the next chapter so expect updates today or tomorrow!

Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/22/2010 Title: Chapter 4: Signs

"If she was so in love with Scott, then why did she jumped in Logan's bed right after her husband died?"

YES JEAN! I WOULD LIKE TO KNOW THAT TOO!

Anyway, to tell you the truth I don't really like people like Ororo. Like they know everything there is.

And God, I just feel like Logan shouldn't have it easy if he wants to be with Rogue. I'll kick his balls before I'll let him near Rogue again.

Good angst. Love it. MOARRR SOOOOOOON! - alia.

Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/22/2010 Title: Chapter 5: Little Lion Man

OH LOGAN YOU STUPID STUPID MAN!

but yes I didn't see that one coming. Gosh, I feel so loved up by you because I was reading chapter 4 at my work place and now I'm reading chapter 5 at my house.

MOAR SOOOOON!!! - alia

Author's Response: I find it funny how some people are able to predict what I\'m gonna write and others not. I\'m glad I suprised you. I\'ll try and have another chapter up today or tomorrow. Thank you for reviewing! Sophie

Reviewer: dancing_donut Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/22/2010 Title: Chapter 6: Not Me, Not I

YES! I LOVE YOU! Right now I'm at the office reading the awesomeness of Marie.

God, I don't know what to think. I mean, if he came to Marie as Wolverine and fucking calling out Jean Grey's name when he's with her than maybe the Wolverine had choose Jean as his mate.

And I don't like that.

And if Logan's mind was being control by Jean, that doesn't make any sense at all.

God! So much possibility on why Logan can't remember! I mean he doesn't suffer from short term memory right?

Moarrr pls? so that when I get home I have something to read? :) - alia