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Reviews by butterfly53
"She doesn't think she knows the man who would still bother
with her after a year, and it makes her wonder if she ever knew him at all."

Rated: Mature
Categories: X2
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3329 - Hits: 2542
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/17/2007 - Last Updated: 11/17/2007
Reviewer: butterfly53 Signed star star star star half star
Date: 09/29/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm glad I click on the side bar stories. I wish you could write a sequel, maybe a "gift" from Logan...
Love your phrasing

Sometimes we get the balance wrong. Life is not about knowing the answers, life is what happens while you're looking for them. And the bad decisions? The screw-ups? They're what keep it interesting.


Rated: Adult
Categories: X3
Characters: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Humor, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 91223 - Hits: 317566
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/31/2008 - Last Updated: 10/11/2009
Reviewer: butterfly53 Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Where do I start!!!!! Fabulous, but you really wrote emotions with reasons, but didn't write it blatently like we weren't educated readers. What I would love is the same story from Logans POV, what her actions seemed like from the outside looking in.

Inspired by John Keats. Logan develops new feelings for Rogue. Surrounded by teammates who think it's wrong and a world that wants them dead, the two meet obstacles that may be too much for them to handle.

Rated: R
Categories: X1, X2, AU
Characters: None
Genres: Drama, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: Not Beta Read

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 4039 - Hits: 7210
Complete?: No - Published: 05/31/2009 - Last Updated: 07/23/2009
Reviewer: butterfly53 Signed star star star half star
Date: 05/31/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the point of view and actual use of language. I haven't read much of Wol POV that is substantial. Keep writing,

"He came to me the night she died. That's what he always did."

On Hiatus.

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 11
Wordcount: 14065 - Hits: 66722
Complete?: No - Published: 02/17/2010 - Last Updated: 05/18/2010
Reviewer: butterfly53 Signed star star star star star
Date: 02/19/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Sorry

Love it!! I love how the physicality of Logan being there isn't enough. I can't wait to see what happens

"Suffering is permanent, obscure, and dark
And has the nature of infinity."
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William Wordsworth

Rated: NC-17
Categories: X1
Characters: None
Genres: Adult, Dark, Shipper
Tags: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 30958 - Hits: 76926
Complete?: No - Published: 04/20/2010 - Last Updated: 05/21/2013
Reviewer: butterfly53 Signed star star star star star
Date: 05/12/2010 Title: Chapter 7: La mort des amants (The death of the lovers)

Awesome twist, these doctors I think are worse than Stryker!! I cant wait to read what will happen next!!

Author's Response: Hahaha!! (evil laugh) Wait till you see next chapter!