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Wow. Really hot and very well written. Love it.
Nice chapter. I really enjoy this story so far. Very well written.
About the parts in German language:
...Kurt's eyes grew large in realization. "Nein, nein..." he uttered over and over.
...Cutting off the Professor, Kurt accused, "Sie haben es gewusst und mir nie gesagt", slipping into his native language. "Mystique ist meine Mutter. Nein, nein, das ist nicht wahr."
The sister-sentence is correct.
Oh wow. This story is really hot. Love it.
A wonderful story. You've done a marvelous job. Thanks so much for sharing.
Uhhh... sorry, no... too unrealistic behavior (I never met someone who's grinning in the throes of ecstasy and passion, but that's just one example of what went wrong). Everythings reads as if you were in a frenzied hurry to get this fic online. Some fleshing out would have been nice.