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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2007 2:20:05 PM Title: Chapter 7

Uh oh ...

Reviewer: Geeves Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2007 3:03:02 AM Title: Chapter 6

oh man i cant wait to see whats gonna happen.when you gonna update

Author's Response: As soon as my fever breaks down and I can write something sensible. Thanks for the fb. :)

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2007 2:30:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

Ooooh, I love the antici......
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pation!
Arane, the only criticism I could give this chapter is the use of the word 'stuff', as in 'women's stuff' - seems like modern language set in older times. I love this story!

Author's Response: I was pondering a bit wheter to use it or not. Then I decided to go with it anyway, because there will most likely be similar blunders along the line. Not really a good explanation, but... :)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 11:11:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh! Who's at the door?! Who's at the door?! Cliffhangers are just evil. Big meanie.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 4:28:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ohhh Great chapter. Love that Logan wants her so much and I love that he is staying. I can't wait to find out who is coming.

And the title of this fic reminds me of something I heard in a Rammstein song. (I think from the song Du Hast, not sure though.)

Author's Response: E Nomine (the band I stole the name of this fic) is a german band, so I'm not surprised if they had something in common with Rammstein.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2007 12:28:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

My my Logan is a horny little Lycan.

And such a nice cliffhanger at the end!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 5:12:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Aw, Logan doesn't really have a chance, does he? She's got that wolf in a whole other kind of trap. That was a bad pun, wasn't it? I'm sorry. Update soon!

Author's Response: Not a bad pun, not at all... ;) Update's coming as soon as I have something to post. Have been busy with the school, but we have a winter break coming next week.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 5:29:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh oh damn - damn good!

Evil cliffhanger though!

**don’t need a pack of wolves as their neighbors.”**

Hmmm can't they be trained as guard dogs or something... just a thought, just a thought ;)

Author's Response: Sure! If you like the unstabile variety... ;)

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 4:19:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! I love me a good werewolf story, and Werewolf Logan is hot! Thanks - I'm addicted now. You're evil. I love you.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 7:48:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

I daresay this chapter was almost cute. It was the whinning, I just wanted to pet him and kiss him on his little wet snout. I hope she doesn't move into town, though. 'Cuz townpeople just suck.

Author's Response: Since when has Marie listened to what Logan tells her to do? ;)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 3:34:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

Awww Wolf Logan has been to puppy school... he'd eat me for writing this ;)

Hope it won't take too long to update because I can't wait to see Logan drooling over Marie in a none Lycan way.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 3:31:15 PM Title: Chapter 4

Well that was very interesting! Wolf Logan can understand Marie and he actually didn't try to eat her. (Though he did eat that other guy! LOL) That’s just too funny to me. And then Logan going out side presumably to throw up and then see where the other guy was. Sorry had to laugh at that. This was a really great chapter! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 2:18:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

I have indeed seen Van Helsing. Many times in fact. It is one of my favorite movies. (Hugh is just to hot in that movie) You really have me fascinated with this story. It is very interesting that there are now 2 wolves. I really expected Loan to be the one to attack Marie cause his inner wolf hates her. Glad it wasn't. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Van Helsing is one of my favorites, too. Hate how it ends, so sad and yet somehow not sad at all. Too confusing ending for me. Next update is almost finished. I may be able to post it in an hour or so. Thanks for the fb. :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 12:05:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oooooh very good!

** Sneezed, sending thick tendrils of drool and snot flying over the floor. **

Ewwwww Lycan drool and snot... ewww and it's not even Logan's... ewww this beast has no manners.

Author's Response: Would you prefer it was Logan's? Well, technically it can't be Logan's, because Logan doesn't drool. Not yet. He hasn't seen Marie naked. Yet... ;)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 11:01:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

I'm really liking this story. It's different. So.. who's the other wolf..hmm?!!

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 6:24:32 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ooooh so now Logan is lose - can't wait for more.


Saw a few things... second paragraph it should be 'whether' not 'weather', and there are some 'it's' though they should be 'its'.



Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up. I'll see if I can spot those and edit a bit. :)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2007 7:56:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, interesting. Ya got me all curious now. Plus, thanks for the German. I haven't read German in years and it was a nice refresher :)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2007 6:30:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh fascinating! I love this so far. You packed a lot into this first chapter and now I am salivating for more! Rogue ever the pariah and Logan a Wolfen. (now is that the same as a werewolf or different?) Please update soon!!!!! I just can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Werewolf. If you have seen the movie Van Helsing, you know what he looks like.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2007 11:44:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Woohoo very interesting!

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