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Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2007 1:23:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

Bad, bad Wolvie! Branch, rolled up newpaper, same thing. :) And its probably a good thing you stopped actually writing the lisp because I probably wouldn't have appreciated the seriousness of the situation through the giggling.

Author's Response: Yeah. I was thinking the unintended humor, too, when I dropped the lisp off. This way the reader can imagine lisping wolverine, or Wolverine speaking normally, whichever suits the best. :)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2007 12:51:18 PM Title: Chapter 21

Ohhh somehow I thought that was what the beast always intended. To make Marie one of them so she could be its mate. That would be a good thing i think. A very interesting read anyway. Rogue the werewolf. LOL

Author's Response: Wolverine is looking for a prey or a mate. But it's Wolverine. Completely different individual than Logan. and either Logan or Marie wants to share Logan's body and mind with an animal. I don't think they would be willing to share Marie either...

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2007 9:40:33 AM Title: Chapter 21

**...thick tendrils of sticky drool slicking her skin.**

Ewwwww very graphic... I'm not very drool resistant.

**..she felt something hard and hot poking her thigh**

Well a neutered Wolverine would be a good Wolverine... not so good for Logan thought *scarches head*

I would threaten the Lycan with a visit at the vets and a few shots... well back then there were no vets, were there?

Author's Response: I don't think there were that many vets around. If there were, probably only treatment they had to offer to any possible disease was a bullet to the head. Neutered Wolverine? In this one it would be a good idea if it didn't mean neutered Logan as well... ;)

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