Reviews For Heavy Duty
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Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 12:18:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was rather nice. The bar felt familiar. You've got a real ease with dialogue, and I like the way their conversation with Bobby felt like a retread of a lot of other conversations they'd had, one of those 'sharing the frustration' talks you regularly have because it's a problem you can't solve.

I also love how much playfulness and togetherness you can sense in this fic. Very nice.

My favorite paragraph:
“Talk’s cheap,” Rogue muttered moving in so she was standing with his legs between hers. Leaning forward she crawled onto the desk, effectively pinning him in place with her body, “Besides, I’m tired of talkin’ about Bobby and that bunch. They just ain’t figured out that I’ve got a real man and not some little boy who needs to be trained.”
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Because it's when it switched to that moment where they stop having the talk into the moment where they are lovers. And because Logan likes getting trapped by Rogue as much as she usually does in most fics ;)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2007 4:40:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hehehe very hot!

Author's Response: Thanks. Wasn't too sure I could pull it off.

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