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Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2007 11:08:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh, I was extremely busy, and I hadn't gotten around to reading this, let alone have time for fb. But I'm so glad you're continuing. I love the way the insecurity and uncertainty is coming into play here.

The telling had it's comic moments, with bad-ass Marie giving Logan a piece of his mind, and Logan's facial expressions were priceless. But as the full import weighed down - when so many things like whether Marie was *Marie* or some incarnation of Marie or Jean Marie were unclear - it all became much more complicated. What implications do the past have on the future? And what, after all, is Logan looking for?

And meanwhile, they're both confused and hurting. Poor Marie, falling asleep in ice cream. Incredibly sweet that Logan lugged her to bed. And I hope Logan listens to his heart, because as Xavier says, maybe his memory isn't important now anyway, not like it was. Of course, maybe it's the bugaboo waiting to seize him at an unlikely moment! *lol* But if he wants something, he should take it. Love him.

And I love the balance of humor and angst in every chapter! Greg? Greg who! *lol*

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the FB and great support, Gamma. I'm still not quite sure where I'm going to go next...I'm leaning quite closely to another face to face between our favorite couple, I don't know about specifics yet, but they will end up together, I promise.

Yeah, the humor stuff, it just pops outta nowhere, I'm a terrible smart @$$ in real life, and that's the sort of thing I'd say, even knowing what the word meant! And besides, Logan is so easy to screw with that way, ya know?!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 6:52:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

Poor forgetful Logan. He might want to take Xavier up on his offer, though. Cuz maybe he can't remember because they aren't REAL memories, it never happened. Rogue is just doctoring photos and making fake documents to get same ass! "See! We're DESTINED to be together!" Ya know, a damn fine piece like him has to watch out for stuff like that... :D

Author's Response: Oh! You are an evil, evil person, Rou! (drums fingers on desk) Hmmm, I 'spose I could forego the plot line I was considering......but, nah! I couldn't do that to Wolvie, such a damn fine piece like him deserves the real thing, not a made up bunch of lies, he's had a hard enough life as it is. 'Sides, that would just add more plot and I can't handle giving that damn bunny MORE crap to work with! As it is, he's sat up on my head, beating me with his carrot! I may not like wild game, but I'm looking up recipes for hasenpfeffer for when this fic is done!!

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