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Reviewer: Valkyrie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2010 6:08:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

"The other (Destroyer) was wearing a some sort of visor over its eyes." Is that a reference to Scott? Great story, can read this over and over without getting bored!

Reviewer: wudelfin Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2007 3:55:59 PM Title: Chapter 28

great stroyline! can't wait for the next installment.

Author's Response: It's already there. Destroyer. And after that Sins Of The Father. After that On The Road. And I just started working on something I hope will become the last part. Posted first chapter already. It's called Home.

Reviewer: Aussie_Dream Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2007 10:30:39 PM Title: Chapter 28

ooooohhh... what a place to stop! maybe wolverine found her? and cos he can smell her scent, he's gone crazy, and now there's a fight outside - which marie's ignoring cos she's too busy missing logan and crying. i'm sure you'll let us know soon...

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 11:32:56 PM Title: Chapter 28

Complete? You call this complete?! I call it evil, pure evil! *kisses Wolverine on the forehead* Poor baby. Thinking makes my head hurt too. Can I just say your characters are perfect?

Author's Response: Wolvie doesn't much appreciate cuddling, but I'm sure Logan would love the fact that somebody gave him a kiss. ;) Poor guy. But hey, if it's any consolation, Wolverine is at home right now. Little grumpy, but happy. Perfect characters? Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 3:02:46 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh, Ara. Somewhat heartbreaking and very intriguing. So we're back full circle, with Logan coming to the conclusion that he must save her from even himself? That's so *awful* for him. For both of them.

And now she really does have a past, like him, she wants to run from. She almost seemed to have an alter-ego there for a while, too. Their situation is eating away at them.

Author's Response: Hate to break them apart. Looks like it was the only way to keep Marie safe. but I believe strongly that they will get back together again. As for alter-egos and rest of that fancy stuff... Don't really know. I just write what they tell me to write. Thanks for the fb. Much appreciated, as always. :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 7:40:10 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oooh can't wait to find out if Marie will actually run.

Author's Response: If she has even half of working brain in that head of hers, she will run. Fast and far away, without turning to look back. Wolverine's going to be Mr. Nice-Guy no more.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2007 1:38:46 AM Title: Chapter 27

Yay! Wolverine! Although, I have to say you're just going to have to quit school. Cuz' I need more of this story and I need it now!! ^.^

Author's Response: No can do. I have to get a job, and without excellent papers from that school that's never going to happen. But don't worry, I have a long weekend now. Might get few chappies done... ;)

Reviewer: Aussie_Dream Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 7:38:09 PM Title: Chapter 27

oooh... someone's gonna get hurt... my bet's on logan :P but you will be nice 2 m..us still, and update soon? please?

Author's Response: I think I'm done hurting them, at least for a while. But someone's going to wake up soon...

Reviewer: Bancainte Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 3:21:31 PM Title: Chapter 26

This is not really a review; just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love how you bring small creatures into the stories. They seem to support that aspect of Logan which is nature, but not wild.
And Logan comes across so well, how his thoughts shift and change, not always getting things right, but always moving, like they do with real people.
And while I'm at it, I might as well tell you how well your Wolverine works here - loved it that you brought in the Destroyer aspect again.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2007 3:16:31 PM Title: Chapter 27

Uh one problem soved and the next one is here...

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Date: 01/11/2007 4:00:26 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh well you mean a weather like now... should have snow but it's spring here.

Author's Response: Have you seen Mad Max? This world is based on that. Mostly desert. Winter is dry season. During summer rains. Those are the only two seasons left.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 4:52:17 PM Title: Chapter 26

***“What will it take to make you see the truth? Camo is gone.

Good question, really good question - can't wait to find out the answer.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 4:48:39 PM Title: Chapter 25

Oh oh Marie really doesn't know that it's Logan... hmmm how will she find out?

Hmmm I always thought that when winter is approaching it's getting colder *scratches head*

Author's Response: This is something that is vaguely mentioned in earlier part, when Logan and Marie are still in his bunker. Before the war begun, something caused climate to change. No more cold winters. Instead hot and very, very dry winters.

Reviewer: sharonmjl47 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 7:21:27 AM Title: Chapter 24

Just fantastic. This keeps getting better. I am on the edge of my seat and waiting for the rest.

Author's Response: *giggles* Don't fall off! And what the *bleep* are you doing in here? I'm waiting for an update to Taking A Risk. Hurry! Loved the last chapter. Sad and angsty, but at least Becky knows now. I really hope she'll understand how much Logan and Marie both love her, no matter what.

Reviewer: Aussie_Dream Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2007 3:02:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

so how does she know it's not camo? and now, if they have kids, does it mean the whole adam and eve plan worked?

and when's the next 1 coming?

gosh i sound like such a brat. thanks so much for updating... i'm sure everyone agrees. :D

Author's Response: Adam & Eve is terminated project. To Camo it was very much up and running, and in his eyes Logan became Adam after he won Camo in battle. So, no. No new superrace. Next one probably tonight or tomorrow. I'm not sure. Haven't started it yet, have to give Logie and Marie some time to rest before prodding them again. :)

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 11:35:03 PM Title: Chapter 24

Ugh. You're endings make me mad because it means there's no more. :(
Although, can I make one small request? More on the sensitive forearms... Oh! And more on "Wolverine: The Destroyer", he's interesting in that messed up way that I love! (okay, two requests, what can I say, I'm needy)

Author's Response: I'm sure Wolverine will come out to play eventually. :)

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 10:10:28 PM Title: Chapter 24

Is Camo short for 'camouflage'? He hides, but he's alter-Logan? The one who claims, but the one, oddly enough, who won't force a confrontation.

Did Logan really kill alter-ego here, or did he *become* it? Or is the fact that he's now 'Adam', and that he's killed the idea of his beast, indicate that he now straddles Wolverine and Logan? Clearly, even Marie is not sure.

But at the beginning of the fight, anyway, I'd say Logan was still Logan. He said Marie didn't belong to anyone. He only promised Camo to take care of her. So perhaps I'm not just naively hopeful, when I see 'Logan' in the way he backs off and cleans up and gets dressed again and eats berries? *bats lashes*

Oh, I could think about this all day! But how much better if I just wait until you update, Ara! Welcome back to school, even if it'd suit me better if you wrote all day instead.

Author's Response: Camo's short for camouflage. Logan is Logan. Will be Logan, at least for a while. No Wolverine yet. :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 5:21:46 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh now I get it a chain armour, mail shirt, mail coat, hauberk... or chain mail... I just didn't see the chain before the mail - thanks ;)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 4:11:04 PM Title: Chapter 24

Ewww that sure was not a nice fight to look at - poor Marie.

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Date: 01/09/2007 4:06:38 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oooh hot!

But I don't get what you mean by 'Marie wearing the mail'... oh do you mean Logan's dog tag?

Author's Response: Remember the jacket she wore earlier? It was lined with a mesh made out of adamantium. When blue mist burned off her clothes, that adamantium mesh was the only thing that remained, and to Logan it looked like a chain mail. Chain mail is a kind of armor, made out of small metal rings. Logan doesn't have tags in this one. Only tag he had was bolted to his skull, and he got rid of it long before he met Marie. Urgh. I hope that made some sense to you. This has been a weird day, and to me there has been very few things that have made sense, but heck, that's life... :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 3:55:53 PM Title: Chapter 22

Aaaah so evil - good that the next chapter is up already.

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2007 3:51:49 PM Title: Chapter 21

Awww well at least they can be fucked up together.

Evil cliffhanger at the end! *runs off to read the next chapter*

Reviewer: Aussie_Dream Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 8:12:28 PM Title: Chapter 23

thank you thank you for updating!

but please no more teasing! i can't stand it!

sorry... inner logan(ess) growling at me... i'll be nice :D

please?

Author's Response: Next update probably tomorrow. School's getting in the way. I'm not liking this slower pace either, but something tells me my teacher's wouldn't appreciate much if I asked them to give me a vacation until this is finished... :)

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 8:41:38 PM Title: Chapter 21

“They gave you life. You took it and made it yours. You have nothing to be ashamed of. You should be proud of yourself. You finished it. Made sure that nobody will suffer in their hands anymore.”

***Aw. He has finally accepted it, maybe. When he's in his Logan state, anyway. Now Adam is on the loose? And Destroyer, sometimes, too? *shiver* Poor Marie.

Great twist, Ara.

Author's Response: Logan has his little hang-ups, but when Marie is concerned, there's nothing wrong. You know the old saying about love making people blind? Logan's deaf, numb, mute and blind. Not necessary a good thing, but... Yeah. Adam is on the loose, and I have a feeling he's not much liking the fact that his girl is taken...

Reviewer: Aussie_Dream Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 6:16:40 PM Title: Chapter 21

c'mon c'mon... i need more! but thx 4 being quick...!!! :)

screaming wil just make wolvie mad, and then he won't tell us anything... right?

so ask marie to soften him up for you! :D

Author's Response: I would ask her if I could. Most of the time I spend chatting with Logie, Marie is still a mystery to me. Next part will come sometime during tonight or tomorrow. At least I hope so. First day at school after vacation, and I don't have a slightest clue of what's going to happen.

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