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Date: 03/13/2013 10:12:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
This looks like a good story... and I would LOVE to read it... except it's in GIANT paragraph form...
It would probably be easier for your readers if you divided the bigger paragraphs into smaller ones... makes our eyes work less... maybe a beta person can help, or if you want, I can.
Date: 05/12/2008 8:46:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have just re-read this and it's just as good the second time around - great read well done x
Date: 03/10/2008 11:27:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with the other two that it'd be easier to read, if you break it up more or seperate it into chapters.
Because as I am incredibly scatter-brained and can't consentrate on reading these huge chunks of paragraphs. This means that I loose interest in reading already half way through one huge chunk. So that above suggestions would be something to take into advisement.
It annoys me, because I love your store so much. (I've only ever gotten through it over on the old WRFA, because it was easier to get through. Meaning no huge chunks to chew my way through.)
Date: 03/13/2007 12:23:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I agree with White Dove totally. this is such a powerful story and would be even more amazing if the paragraphs and dialogue were broken up a bit more than they are.
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2007 4:27:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok I really really liked this story! I lvoe that Logan was so sweet yet tough. But i had trouble reading it because of the paragraph length. it would be much easier to read if the paragraph were split into much smaller portions.