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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2007 5:36:01 AM Title: Chapter 24 - The Beginning of the End

**When he touched her skin she flinched a little as his surface thoughts went through her, pride, love and desire, watching her put Scott through his paces and beating him at every turn.**

Nothing wrong with a little forepaly ;)

Reviewer: Valeriusjka Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2007 4:04:51 AM Title: Chapter 24 - The Beginning of the End

Ah, the first confromtation/test/welcome party for Marie. I can feel how she is infuriated by being a bug under scrutinity, but also the 'mind game' the Xavier crew doesn't know about.

It's a bit sad that we never really got to see Scott/Cyclops do many fight moves in the movies. *pets Scott muse* Is difficult to imagine him in action, most of the time.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 10:51:01 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Beginning of the End

Wow! She's really hell on wheels when she gets riled up, huh? I love it! Sometimes ol' One-Eye needs taking down a peg or two, and I simply *love* that Rogue and her inner wolverine were the ones to do it!

One question tho - well, two really - 1)was Rogue *naked* while she was fighting Scott?... >she wasn't wearing anything and her skin was *ON*.< 2)How many days until 'Thursday', and how is just a few days, or even a week suppose to lessen the wolverine in her head?? They had the whole winter to put him there nice and solid, what's a couple'a days supposed to do???

Author's Response: Nah she wasn't *naked* naked, just her skin wasn't completely covered, her hands were bare as were her feet, making it harder for Scott. They arrived on the Monday, Thursday will give her enough time to get her mind in order when she fights against the people who were going to use her as bait. Fighting Logan was about teaching her, this is revenge and she needs to *control* her emotions, hence why Logan needs the extra time with her to get her to calm down. When she attacked the men in the alley, she killed one and maimed the others. She can't do that here hence the 'Wolverine' influence story, it gives her a chance to get her mind straight before she faces them again. Hope that answers the questions, thanks for commenting hon!

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