Much darker than I normally read, but in spite of a few run-on sentences, this is really well done! Gripping, scary, intense - I rarely give a 10 rating, but you just got one.

Author's Response: Thanks Wolf, I love reading your fic, the detail you manage to get into every scene is amazing. I'm glad you like it, it's the more brutal side of things I think, the harsh reality against the fluff of what we hope would happen. Hopefully I'll be adding more to it today, thanks for reading and commenting.