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Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 7:26:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Shouldn't he be glad the other 22 didn't survive, that's a lot of brats to take care of.... I love Scott! Especailly grumpy Scott. Beautiful writing, love that its an X-Men Evolution piece, can't wait to see what gonna happen.

Author's Response: haha, can you imagine logan with 22 little mutants pulling on his hair and tearing him to pieces? i guess i wanted him to be anguished at the fact that x23 suffered so much. when i watched evolution with my little sister i decided i had to do a fic about it. this is somewhere between evolution and comics i think... and i can't wait either! thanks for your words... :-D

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 4:25:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

It's not confusing - it's unfolding. And it's certainly not boring *g*

Still lovin' your Scott :o)

Author's Response: yay! glad i'm not the only one nursing a mini scott crush. but it can be our little secret. thanks for the feedback! i'll try to be more prompt with an update this time...

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2007 7:22:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

"She flipped down the black visor and set off after him. This sure beat English essays" Hell yeah! I'd agree with that!

And I'm enjoying your dark and emo Scott more than I probably should *g*

Looking forward to reading what happens next.

Author's Response: He's hot when he's dark and emo. Haha, so are most men. But that could just be my taste...

Reviewer: AshleighHowlett Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2007 12:50:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like your story so far, I am a big fan of X-men and I love the Evolution Series. X23's real name in X-Men is actually Laura not Anaya but that is a beautiful name too.

Author's Response: Yes, I read that her real name given by her surrogate mother was Laura Kinney.. I was thinking of making it like she wanted to forget that part of her life. Thanks for the encouragement. :-)

Reviewer: September Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 4:01:13 PM Title: Prologue

I don't know much about the evolution verse - but you've got my curiosity piqued. I'm looking forward to finding out where you take this next :o)

Author's Response: wow, I am honored that you were the first to review my story... you're one of my favorite authors on this site. and *gulp* I'm looking forward to where I take this too.. since I don't know... :-)

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