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Reviewer: pleasuremaiden Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 4:29:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

WOW! I loved the story..and the song! thanks so much for sharing!

Reviewer: rawrave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 7:45:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great fic, loved that Marie read his feelings due to his mutation. And Evanescence are always a great band to write a fic to, all that passion and feeling.
LOL, good job! :)

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 3:04:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

*shiver* I love how songs can catch you up in the moment, make you do and say things that you wouldn't normally because it's everything you're feeling at the time.

I really think it works much better from Logan's POV here. Good choice. I see such aching loneliness in him, but he really feels he belongs to her. It's a side of Logan we rarely get to see--the thoughts behind the words.

This was my favorite part:
"Clothes left abandoned on the floor he laid her on the bed. He had saved her life, given a ocean full of blood for her and right here and now she was saving his. Saving him from loneliness, saving him from killing himself with buried feelings of love."

Great visual images. I could see the clothes falling. The ocean is particularly fitting for them - boundless and deep and emotional. I like the way you tied it thematically to L&M.

Very nice songfic. Evanescence's passion does remind me of L&M, too.

Reviewer: aranenumenesse Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 6:34:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

No crap. Few misspelled words, but apart from that this was great. Was this the one you told me about earlier? This was beautiful. Evanescence is one of my favorites, and I have tried to write L/R songfic about their songs several times. For some reason it doesn't work with me, but you made it. Wow!

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