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[Report This]Date: 10/21/2009 11:40:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
"You lucky son of a bitch."
ok, that line made me like Scott for once LOL!
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 9:37:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
First of all, I LOVE Peppermint schnapps!
“We fucked! It was good! We’re going to fuck some more in the near future! Get over it!”
Second, I'm slightly confused (no schnapps involved!) whose line is this? Did Logan or Rogue say it? Kinda changes the mood of the scene depending on who said it, ya know?
Author's Response: Next chapter reveals it. Yeah. Peppermint is good. My one and only vice from that department.
Date: 02/04/2007 9:19:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
"Okay. She’s too young, you’re a bastard, you’re not good for her, you should stop what you’re doing… You lucky son of a bitch."
LMAO! I LOVE Scott!
Author's Response: What's there not to love about? He was kind of uptight in the movies, but not as bad as some writers (me included) usually tend to picture him.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2007 6:31:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
"We fucked the living daylights out of each other."
Haha! Poor Scott. *grins*
Something I noticed: I'm not sure if you did it on purpose, but you hop from present to past tense in one scene, and then back to present again. It's a bit confusing, because it makes you wonder where they are now when you suddenly read in past tense. Anyway, I'm still on it. I wonder what X's going to do now. Heh.
Author's Response: Yup. Noticed that myself, too. Have to edit a bit. Thanks.