cool but dark, nice.

Wow. Very dark. Poor Logan. When paranoia combines with a savior complex, only bad things can happen. And it's worse because of his healing, his power, his mutation because it makes him that much better able to cope.

"He’s not a burden to me. Far from it. But there are those moments I told about. Clear moments. When he can pull his act together long enough to take a good look around him. Just before his concentration breaks disgusted grimace crosses his face. At that moment he’s perfectly aware of what he’s become, and I don’t think he likes it."

I love that moment when the old Logan breaks through and judges his current state. How little he is able to control it. And also that breathless moment when he *is* sleeping and she thinks he may be dead. And the image of Logan watching the thin slice of light underneath the door, rocking. It's like a horror you can't escape.

Very intense. I think enhanced by the storytelling method of interspliced thoughts.

I didn't want to read this when I still thought I'd finish one of the same title, but DAMN! there's no way I could have brought on the angst-y darkness like you. I don't know why I worried. *lol* Good work.

Author's Response: Thanks. This started at first completely different. Was going to let them tell their stories in two parts. First just Marie, then Logan after her, but it didn't seem to work that way, so I chose to divide and scramble their thoughts. And how the heck do you put chapters to these reviews and responses? Argh! Duh. Never mind. I chose "Heavy Duty", because I was quite sure only few others would take it, but now it looks like everybody took the liking to it. Grr... Should have gone with "Golden Nuts" instead... ;) But thanks for the fb. And once again, your version... WOW! I just fell in love with your playful Logie!