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Reviewer: Deb Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 6:11:55 AM Title: Chapter 12: And So the Story Goes...

Loved it hun! Jamie was so cute...she reminds me of some of the little girls I work with, very clever :)

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2007 11:38:53 PM Title: Chapter 12: And So the Story Goes...

“She asked for a pony last Christmas, do you think I bought it for her?! God, I bust my ass on a daily basis for lousy tips… I can’t afford to get Jamie expensive toys, but I do with what I got. Now you mosey on in like some kind of year round Santa and give in to her fantasy. I worked hard to teach my daughter the value of things that money can’t buy… you’re ruining that. Stop trying to buy her… she needs a father, not an ATM machine!”

Hehe - genius. I love your Rogue. Very articulate. Strong. Not willing to take crap. And also, sometimes, wrong.

This was my favorite Marie moment:
“Are you lying again?”

“… Yes.”

That's so wonderful! I really dig that self-deprecating, humorous honesty. Heh. Oh, and if only Logan were to hear, I'm sure he'd fall in love, too.

Sweet at the end. I'm glad they made a go of it. I'm not entirely certain it was love that drew them together. In fact, I'm pretty sure it wasn't. But I can funnily enough see it working anyway - see the love developing because they both want family and stability and love so badly. Because they're both survivors, honest, compromising, and willing to work hard. They're both willing to listen, as evidenced in their second make-up conversation, and they're both open to love, too.

So...*hugs them*...this was rather wonderful. So glad it ended well, after you were so mean to them at first. :)

Reviewer: bima140277 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2007 5:54:15 AM Title: Chapter 12: And So the Story Goes...

“I have to go to the bafroom.”

Oh my *ROFLAMO*

Really good ending!



(“Is it okay if I Jamie now? I mean, if you’re busy of something I could-”

Is there a word missing?

I know now why I find the typos... when there is only one in a chapter I notice it, if there are many I don't see them.)



Author's Response: the word is "see". there are more typos that i have to fix... i noticed, but the heat's out in my place and the computer is connected next to a drafty/broken window. Hence me not wanting to spend a lot of time at my keyboard last night. anyway thanks for noticing and i'll get to making the changes. P.S. You've given me the most reviews... you rock!

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