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Reviewer: bima140277 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 4:01:32 AM Title: Chapter 10: Shock, Figuring Things Out and Proper Introductions

Neither knew of an easy way to break the news to Jamie and of coarse it would have to be soon, what with her early inquiries about not having a father and Logan’s eagerness for a proper introduction to his progeny.

I found a typo, there is 'of coarse' instead of 'of course' - that I saw it is a miracle ;)

Gonna delete this later.

Author's Response: I'm not gonna delete your comment. I'm gonna fix the typo, thanks for pointing it out... I always have problems with words that sound the same.

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Date: 02/03/2007 3:49:26 AM Title: Chapter 10: Shock, Figuring Things Out and Proper Introductions

*runs around looking for the next chapter*

Evil, such an evil cliffhanger!

Author's Response: sorry, it wasn't meant to be... I just didn't have enough to say after that. It seemed like as good a place as any to stop.

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