The lies get deeper and deeper in this fic. I love the way we're starting to see the psychosis of Jean's mind, making Rogue crazier even than she has been. Everyone seems so impotent in this fic--unable to cope. Nobody knows what to do.

Logan doesn't know if he wants Rogue or Jean. He wants to be the good guy, and that desire prevents him from pressing his advantage as the bad guy. Rogue wants to be whatever Logan wants her to be - but the other half of it is that he doesn't actually want her to be herself. Or so she thinks. Jean is torn, and she doesn't know who *she* wants to be.

God, the angst! I love how deeply you're weaving this. Incredibly interesting. Plot bunnies everywhere. *bunnies bouncing off the walls*