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Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2007 10:20:02 AM Title: Chapter 12: An Explanation To End Them All (The Phoenix Speaks)

Ah...I assumed so. The timeline of events is somewhat confusing, but somewhere in my confusion, I decided that this was the only way it could be. Thus the Phoenix's actions are understood. Even Logan's actions with Marie in his bed.

This makes Logan's dilemma about who to kill or love less poignant. But it doesn't detract from Marie's choice. She chose in good faith to 'give up' her body to Jean, and that's still a deeply tragic position. Now perhaps the journey is to see how to get Marie back and kill the Phoenix - persuade Marie that she can be loved for herself. Poor Marie.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2007 9:59:02 PM Title: Chapter 12: An Explanation To End Them All (The Phoenix Speaks)

Ok, so correct me if I get any of this wrong…
1)Scott’s dead as a message from Phoenix to Xavier
2)Jean’s dead because she couldn’t handle taking in Phoenix
3)Marie took in Phoenix thinking it was Jean
4)Phoenix’s plan is getting all messed up because Logan is actually thinking with the head that’s on his shoulders(!!) and isn’t buying this whole line about Jean not believing in an afterlife and never seeing Scott again, yadda, yadda, yadda.
Is that about it, in a walnut shell that it?? (you can delete this review if I've let too many cats outaa your bag) ^_-


Author's Response: oh good, so it's clear then ;)

Author's Response: oh, i won't delete this cuz i'm hoping others will see it, therefore clearing up any confusion ;)

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 2:59:52 AM Title: Chapter 11: Explanations (Mind Games)

ok i am still confused. How does all this translate into Rogue having jean in her head and taking off with logan? Hurry with the chapters so i am not so confused.

Author's Response: okay... beleive me i get your confusion... i wrote the damn thing and even i have to convince myself that i know what's going on;) But this part is 'explanations' which is basically giving you a back story as to how everything happened. i just wanted to give some reasons behind stuff and tie up some ends. the next chapter should close this part up and all the confuse should be gone... i hope.

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2007 12:56:43 AM Title: Chapter 11: Explanations (Mind Games)

Ok, but just a teensy bit!! And only if more chappies are comin' - SOON!!!

Author's Response: yes, hopefully soon... gotta a paper to write today, but most likely tonight i'll write a new chapter ;)

Author's Response: oh and i did screw with canon in that the Phoenix had no embodiment to begin with... it was just a force... made it easier to deal with.

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 9:20:45 PM Title: Chapter 8: Explanations (The Meeting)

Ah! A nice Jean is evil plot. That makes this into a bit of a revenge fic. Or at least one where you mind less that someone dies. I'm so glad you pulled Logan back from killing them both. *feeling relieved*

What plots you come up with! Am jealous. :D

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 12:55:37 PM Title: Chapter 8: Explanations (The Meeting)

Uh-oh...'containing' the Phoenix?? Sounds like a ticket to disaster! Just delaying the inevitible of it destroying everything...can't wait to find out what everyone does when they find out *who* the vessel currently is for the Phoenix!! heh heh Or is this some of the cannon you're gonna screw with???

Reviewer: ct_xfan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 7:36:23 AM Title: Chapter 7: Not Telling

Oooooo! I didn't want to get into another 'not complete' story, but your low word count convinced me to...and I'm so glad it did!! I'm not usually one for angst, but this is good!! (and since you *promised* they'd end up together, it made it all easier to swallow!) [starts to bang fists on desk] Up-dates! Up-dates! Up-dates!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 3:24:48 AM Title: Chapter 7: Not Telling

jesus this is intense!! Ironically the only one i feel bad for here is rogue. I wish Logan really loved her and not Jean. Update soon!!!

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2007 1:25:22 AM Title: Chapter 7: Not Telling

Oh, I just started to read this story and I LOVE it. It's very unqiue idea (the-jean-in-the-rogue-with-the-love-and-the-what-not)and I'm pissed I didn't think about it! But now I'm torn between what I what to happen next. I want him to kill her cuz then that would be really poetic and sad, but then I want them to fight and make it through and somehow find a happy ending out of all the misery. Ugh, now I'm just exhausted. Great story, though, keep it up. Now!

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2007 12:04:18 AM Title: Chapter 5: Perfect

The lies get deeper and deeper in this fic. I love the way we're starting to see the psychosis of Jean's mind, making Rogue crazier even than she has been. Everyone seems so impotent in this fic--unable to cope. Nobody knows what to do.

Logan doesn't know if he wants Rogue or Jean. He wants to be the good guy, and that desire prevents him from pressing his advantage as the bad guy. Rogue wants to be whatever Logan wants her to be - but the other half of it is that he doesn't actually want her to be herself. Or so she thinks. Jean is torn, and she doesn't know who *she* wants to be.

God, the angst! I love how deeply you're weaving this. Incredibly interesting. Plot bunnies everywhere. *bunnies bouncing off the walls*

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