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Date: 12/24/2009 5:20:53 PM Title: Snow
Absolutely love the last line. I think Logan is a little loopy in this, but I like it. --Wendie
Date: 01/17/2007 10:26:33 PM Title: Snow
*lol* I think it says a lot more about my high school English teacher's taste than anything about your education level.
But mad? Yes, I stand by my statement:
"You’re pretty quiet. I don’t mind"
" I pull over to a truck stop and check that you’re comfortable. I could go and get us some coffee, but you looked exhausted earlier. I let you sleep, and keep on driving. I’m not really hungry myself either."
Tell me that is not madness? He is either in deep denial, or that is madness.
But this is what sounds really strange to me:
"You love the snow, but I think it’s little too deep; you fucking drown in it or something."
Because, lol, it sounds like he tried to set her on her feet first!
So, yeah, Ara. I think he may be a little crazy. I know he made her a promise, but...poor Logan. *pets him*
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2007 2:06:02 AM Title: Snow
Yowie! Did NOT see that coming. Even at the 'reek' line, I had to go back and make sure she hadn't forgotten to bathe. *shudder* I know you can handle criticism. All I can give you is, with a little polishing of the grammar in spots, I'd have given this one a 10! It's that powerful in so few words.... awesome.
Author's Response: And you call that a criticism? Trashing my grammar? I *know* you can do better... ;)
Glad you liked this. Like I told to Gamma, this one was written in a haste, and I was actually contemplating weather to post or delete. Closed my eyes and pressed a button. Now it's starting to look like it was a good thing that I hit send instead of delete. :)
FB for this one wake me up to something. Looks like I don't let Marie do talking, or do much anything enough, when her silence in this one didn't make anybody think.
Date: 01/15/2007 9:55:03 PM Title: Snow
Reeks?
Such a quiet melancholy running throughout, and then reeks? This actually reminded me of Porphyria's Lover by Browning. Logan is jealous, he is mad, but he's got her in death. But I think what makes me love him, what makes this melancholy instead of creepy, is that Logan still counts himself lucky, still humbles himself, still so clearly yearns for what he never thinks he deserves--and then we learn he'll never gain it, because it's gone.
'You always knew what buttons to push'. How true, Ara. Deceptive, sly. I'll love your Logan forever, even when you make him mad like this. :)
Author's Response: Duh. Tells, much about the level of my education, when I first tried to find a fic named "Porphyria's Lover". Found the poem. I'm flattered. And loved that poem. I don't read poetry, it's not my cup of tea, but this one was interesting.
"Snow" actually started completely different. All day long kept seeing Logan and Marie sitting in a beat-up pontiac on a deserted beach. Logan was talking, Marie wasn't. No matter how hard I tried to write it, it didn't work. Then I got back home, wrote next chappie to Destroyer and thought I would give Logan and Marie one more shot before going to sleep. "Snow" wrote itself in about ten minutes. For a moment I was going to delete it, but decided to post it here anyway. What's the worst that could happen? Nobody reads it. And I could have lived with that, too.
Logan mad? Hey, he just kept his promise. Okay, his girl was dead already, but it's never too late.
Date: 01/15/2007 6:15:33 PM Title: Snow
September already said it. Lovely, moving, romantic, then WHAMMO! 2x4 between the eyes! Had to read that last paragraph 3 times before it really sunk in. Ya got me, hook, line, and sinker!!
Author's Response: Thank you. "Snow" is not my personal favorite, I hate when Logan or Marie is dead, but hey, I already made Marie meets dead Logan, so it's only fair to write it the other way around.
Date: 01/15/2007 5:51:07 PM Title: Snow
Oh Christ. Logan turned Heathcliffe. I was reading this thinking it was a nice gentle lovely story, it was lulling me into this happy place, just before I was about to go to sleep, then BAM! She's starting to reek??! OMG! I can offically say you totally shocked the hell outta me! Very clever...disturbing, yes...but clever. *backs slowly away from Heathcliffe!Logan*
Author's Response: And since when I have written nice and gentle and left it to there? :)
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2007 5:19:32 PM Title: Snow
Ohhh! That is just gut wrenching! Now I am so sad!! Great job on it. Very powerful.