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Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 10:17:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

Dammit! If she could do that, why didn't she do that sooner? *rolls eyes* Like, maybe when she was captured in the first place? Or sent into the orgy torture chamber first? Or when she was being raped, maybe? *sighs*

Ok. Maybe she can only pull that out when she's threatened with more than herself. When she's faced with losing someone else, too. Dammit! That's an inconvenient mutation, though. :)

Oh, Ara, what am I going to do with you? (I only get this upset with stories I like, though.) Poor Wolverine, too. If he knows how to kill himself, he must never have wanted to die before. Interesting.

Author's Response: Marie doesn't know how to use her secondary mutation. Logan has that pesky healing factor, which wasn't working right now, so he thought he would have a chance to finish all.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 5:28:23 PM Title: Chapter 7

Damn straight! You show 'em girl! I love when Rogue does mass destruction. Bravo.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 2:42:02 AM Title: Chapter 6

*dances with delight* Woohoo! I'm hooked - can't wait for next chunk of Wolvie hotness.

Author's Response: ... And next part is the last instalment to this particular story. Third part of this series is under work, and might take some time, but I'll try to post it soon.

Reviewer: Wolf CrescentWalker Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 2:37:19 AM Title: Chapter 5

Woah! Just.. woah!

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2007 9:49:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh, Ara. This is what I was afraid of after last chapter--that she'd eventually end up enjoying it and it would tear them apart. Marie would feel guilty and shame and need Logan then, need forgiveness. And Logan would be feeling the same, would be unable to take away that shame through touch. It'd be eating up at him, too. Because how can she ever trust him again? And really, isn't that a *very* good question--if he can turn into Wolverine at any time, as he's shown up until this point, what's to stop that happening again? Can she *ever* be safe with Logan if she's not safe with Wolverine?

And Logan loved her for her innocence and purity, and if in his own mind, he's the one to extinguish that--what then? Does he put behind him forever the desire to be man?

And for her, this was her greatest fear--more than capture, more being found out. She never wanted Camo's eager, animal fucks, destined to reproduce in a lab, and now she's raped (and sure to be impregnated) by the only man she's ever trusted, too.

And I think this chapter shows that *he's* being raped, too, really--with the drugs, by the guards. A mindfuck.

How absolutely *horrible* for both of them. But you know--as terrible as this all is, you still haven't made me *hate* Wolverine. He's...I don't know how I'd describe him, but he's been made this way. This is the way he copes, and this is how he wants and lives. He's closed and determined and brutal, but it's always a necessary brutality. It's somehow always a reflection of what's been done to him and what he must do to survive. If it weren't how it was with Marie, I'd almost be glad he'd found his *something*. If only it wasn't her, if only it wasn't this.

*shudder* It's so raw, these last few chapters. They're so short, and yet I seem to be able to feel and see everything. Incredible writing. *pleads* Please make it better?

Author's Response: To Logan this doesn't tarnish her innocence. She isn't volunteering to this. Even Wolverine seems to realize that. Actually Logie has been quite mad at me lately because I listened to Wolverine rather than wrote what he wanted me to write. This part of the story is called Destroyer for a reason. Something must come down and be Destroyed before they can start building again. Don't know yet what it is, but I'm sure Wolverine will tell it to me eventually.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2007 8:39:59 PM Title: Chapter 6

I'm sorry. I know this means I'm completely sick in the head but... I like Wolverine better. *gets out pen and paper* Can I get the address to that breeding compound?

Author's Response: Ookay... Let me see. Just drive out to the desert. Then try to hitch a ride from a caravan. Tell everybody that you're a mutant. You'll end up to one of those centers in no time. :) I'm glad somebody likes Wolvie.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2007 11:35:13 AM Title: Chapter 6

aawwwww! this is heart wrenching! I feel terrible for all of them. Please Logan Come back for good!!! (glad to see a glimpse of him this time!) Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2007 9:36:37 AM Title: Chapter 5

Jeeze when you say dar you mean dark. I feel so bad for Both Logan and especially bad for Marie!!!! To be raped by the man she loves... Well its not him in there but *Snif!* I can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response: I don't usually hand out warnings, but this was a special case. I don't usually make Logan raping Marie either. Well, technically it's Wolverine doing the raping in this one, but... More is coming, tonight or tomorrow. Depends on if I can make up something readable.

Reviewer: Aussie_Dream Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2007 11:09:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

please make it better! while i love wolverine, i can't abide the thought of marie in pain. entertain me... but help marie 2 please.

Author's Response: Like I said to Gamma little earlier, I hated the fact that I had to break Marie and Logan apart, but it was the only way to keep her safe. Wolverine is... I don't even know what or who he is. Hated this part of the story, but it had to be told. More probably tomorrow. I'm sure it gets little better for Marie.

Reviewer: RouDeVil Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2007 6:29:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

I, um, um,I..I.. yeah.

Reviewer: White Dove Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2007 3:19:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

wow this is just dang. Is it wrong that i find the mass orgy funny? Cause LOL I really enjoyed Warrior and am enjoying this story as well. Update soon!

Author's Response: Wrong or right, who cares as long as you like what you're reading. :) Next chapter is going to take some time to write, and it's going to be a tad bit darker than the beginning of this story.

Reviewer: Gamma meta Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2007 3:06:02 PM Title: Epilogue

All Wolverine, huh? After all he's tried to do, all the man he's tried to build? He lost it, chunk by chunk: first his little compound, then his fancy mutant truck, then his capture, saved by Marie. But what really hurt, I think, was Camo. He killed the animal meant for Marie, but he became that animal to do that, too. At least in his own mind. In Marie's mind, most of all. And now he's back, not even thinking again. Poor Logan.

Will Marie with her powers to absorb and project come into play again? I imagine that would heal him, and maybe it's time for her to play the savior this time. Maybe it's time for her to claw back at his humanity.

Oh, poor both of them.

Author's Response: We won't see much Marie in this part, I think. I hope. She's not very compatible with Wolverine. Logan's a different matter, but he's not home at the moment.

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