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I’ll have to admit- I feel rather awful for reviewing so late. I’m always so anxious for another instalment of this fic and yet it’s taken me this long to review it.
I loved this chapter. IVE REALISED I LOVE YOUR MARIE AND SCOTT INTERACTIONS. I really do love how you write Scott. Fabulous stuff to be sure. I keep trying to second guess what the next chapter will hold and I can’t put my finger on it at all- especially now Marie is trying to join the team!!
I actually check this site every day to see if you’ve updated and as always I do read it multiple times- I’ve been abroad for a month with ever increasing levels of stress and anxiety. Reading your work helps me so much so huge thank you.
Hope you’re safe and well in this new year. Can’t wait to read more.
Damn, my heart is always in my throat every time there’s an update of this story. Brilliant update, loved the interaction between Logan and rogue, even if jean had to be brought up, ick. Curious and a little worried about how things will go with rogue joining the team (or at least wanting to...). Excited for more!!
Author's Response: You're the sweetest. Thank you for being such an encouraging reader.
Oh my gosh!! I loooove this story. It’s so intriguing! I know you just poster, but each chapter makes me eager for the next!
Author's Response: **squealing** Thank you so much! I'm two scenes into Chapter Nine and riding the high of inspiration and enthusiasm delivered by sweet comments like this.
Okay so after the minimum five read throughs I have this to say: YOU ARE WORTH THE WAIT.
I can kinda see how you might have had issues getting this onto paper but dear sweet baby jesus your writing is intoxicating. I love how you write the professor (squee) even with the bad situations. Also for someone who irrationally hates Jean (like I promise you its saying a lot about my personality) but I love how you write her aswell. SHE IS BELIEVABLE beyond belief. Those subtle signs people miss about an abuser.
I can honestly say I HATE reading WIPs. The waiting, the wondering, second guessing whats going to happen next for the author to take it in another direction! So I really hope you get how much I love your writing. I've three "WIP" authors I will read and wait for without question- You are now top of that list. Thank you so much for continuing to write this and I hope its brining you a bit of happiness knowing how much I adore reading it.
AND ON A SIDE NOTE YOU TALKED ABOUT WHOSE LINE IS IT ANYWAYS YOU ARE MORE PRECIOUS THAN LIFE (I kinda love that show- it always makes me laugh no matter how sad/bad I'm feeling)
Author's Response: I must have scanned your words a dozen times yesterday--in the middle of a hallway, in the middle of writing my research proposal, in the middle of teaching a class on the criteria for evaluating credible news sources. Just all day. You're the kindest person ever, and I carried a smile on my face all day because of you. Thanks so much.rnrn(And Whose Line is definitely my comfort show. It never gets old.)
Awesome (the chapter in general, not Xavier in particular) Totally had to read this chapter twice to try and absorb it. So hope Logan is going to start getting answers soon!
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying the piece! I hope I'm not drawing the mystery out too long--in the past (Heal Over), I think I may have rushed some conclusions, so you'll have to let me know if the build-up pays off. But answers coming soon! Jumping back to Marie for the next section. :) Thank you so much for your attention to this story.
Wow, wonderfully intense. I’m so absorbed in this! Great update, I’m so eager for more: especially after that cliffhanger! :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that! Thank you so much. I was really hoping the last scene would get the blood pumping. :)
I feel really ashamed I'm only reviewing this chapter now, especially due to the rough time you're having ( Hope things get better asap!)
I really loved this chapter GODDAMMIT BOBBY
This fic I honestly believe is one of the best I've read- I cant stop thinking about it! Honestly I'm beginning to think I've a problem- but dam its a good one :3
Author's Response: Thank you for this message. You're absolutely wonderful. It's taking me a bit longer (doesn't it always?) to get the last tricky scenes edited, but I hope to have chapter eight up soon. I appreciate you!
I'm so glad you are still writing this one. I can't wait for more :-)
Author's Response: I want to say "Of course I am!" but To Run in Circles hangs on me like Jacob Marley's chains lol. Thank you for the kind encouragement!
Brilliant new chapter, thank you so much for the update:) definitely time for Logan to dump jean’s evil manipulative ass. Can’t wait to see what comes from his investigation into the sketchbook! Excited for more!! (Of rogue, and a lot less Jean, lol)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for coming back to it! Things are definetly coming to a head in Chapter Eight
Another great chapter! Jean sounds like she's trying to discreetly cover her own arse by beating around the bush with Marie...it was a little irritating. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks!
Author's Response: I don't know if I missed this review or if my response just didn't post. But you're right about Jean. I enjoy writing scenes where she is manipulative, though I'm trying to give her more depth than an outright evil villain.
OH MY GOD ANOTHER UPDATE :D
I must really be coming off as crazy but I cant help it. With each instalment of this story I'm becoming more and more addicted. I'm so glad to hear things in rl are feeling a bit better for you- you deserve mucho good karma for the joy you bring me. Hoping things only get better for you now- sending positive vibes your way. Cant wait for the next one *-* Im off to reread the whole thing (again again again
Author's Response: I'm watching my cat, Rousseau, roll into a plate full of catnip, and I've realized that it is a perfect representation of how reviews make me feel. Thanks for the kind note; I hope you realize how happy you've made yet another insecure writer. So glad you liked the chapter. Thank you!
Still loving this! Evil, manipulative Jean is my favorite as well and you have used her grandly in this chapter.
Author's Response: Haha! Thank you. There's just something so satisfying about writing an EvilJean!
Once again, you made my day when I saw an update. I think you captured Jean so well, that shell of caring over the "I know what's best and you'll fall in line or else" that's at the core of her. Of course from watching the movies, I think she got that attitude from the Professor.
Author's Response: That makes me so happy. And I think you're right. Jean is such a tricky character to write--on the one hand, I want to give her more depth than I had in previous stories. On the other hand, I want to punch her in the face. It's just *fun* to hate this character.
Yay, new chapter, just perfect, I mean Jean ruins everything, which obviously isn't your intention, and I'm sure there's a lot more, but just ewww. Loved all the rogan in this chapter, any interaction is good interaction .;) hope more sooner rather than later!!
Author's Response: Haha. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Jean makes such a perfect antagonist; I almost love her for it. Hoping to get chapter seven up before the 20th!
Oh goodness. I’m just returning to the WRFA after a long absence, and I’m so glad your story was the first one I chose to read. This is perfectly paced and so eerie, and I really, really can’t wait to read what happens next. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Author's Response: Your sweet review gave me just the creative boost I needed. Thank you so much!
Ahhhh, this story is so good! I am so intrigued. I love everything you have written to lead us down this mysterious path, wondering what could be just around the corner. As always, you have such a great way with words that just add so much to the experience. "Speaking took effort, and he seemed to draw the words as one might scrape water from parched well."
Hope the writer's block doesn't hit you too hard again--let me know if you need a beta or if there is anything I can do to help! By the way, are you on A03 or tumblr? I would love to follow you there.
Words- cannot describe how hungry I am for more of this. With every line my mind has a dozen questions and theories!! The descriptions of the scene, Logan's feelings- I feel both him and I are watching his body from above not really knowing what's going on. CANT WAIT FOR MORE
Author's Response: I read this in a crowded room, and it was all I could do not to whoop with happiness. Thank uou!
I love this story. I’m always excited to see an update. I can’t wait to see where Marie and Storm (and Scott?) are stashed...
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Update days are my happiest--I just wish they came closer together!