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Reviewer: BlueFrog Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2017 12:30:25 PM Title: Chapter 22: Now

Damn. I just love this story so much and am so sad that it's coming to an end.

For this chapter, I loved several things:

1. I *loved* that Laura rescued herself, which is really no surprise given how much I love strong female characters being able to help themselves.

2. I *loved* Logan's reaction to seeing Marie and realizing it was her. Her forcing him to use his senses to recognize her was a great touch.

3. I *loved* the explanation for Logan having Marie in his head. It wasn't what I had expected, which I also love :D

4. I *loved* the exploration of Logan's scars, which was even better than I could have anticipated after your teaser on Tumblr!

5. I *loved* Marie's acceptance of time and aging and Laura.

Author's Response: Oh, you lovely, kind person you. Thank you so much for the specificity of your feedback here. I'm glad you like these parts, especially about Laura. Strong female characters FTW! :D

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