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Reviewer: DarkFay Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2017 1:21:02 AM Title: Chapter 13: Then

Whew! What a chapter! Makes your head spin when you try to think on it too hard, the differing realities. I look forward to more. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, and trust me, working between those timelines had my head spinning too, and that wasn't without any wine. :P Thanks again!

Reviewer: BlueFrog Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2017 4:45:28 PM Title: Chapter 13: Then

Holy hell. Holy damn hell. How do you do this? How is this so damned good that I just want to read this over and over again.

I love the hints of jealous/annoying Bobby when Rogue goes to talk to Logan. This is quickly becoming my favorite story ever. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Favorite lines:

"That’s more like it, you stupid fucker, he thought to whatever Logan had been mulling around this room last night."

"'Shit,' Scott said."

Author's Response: Oh, you are way, way too nice! Thank you for the love though. It literally keeps me writing. Happy that you liked those lines. <3 Now, it's your turn to update! (Pwetty please?) :D

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