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Reviewer: BlueFrog Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2017 10:43:21 AM Title: Chapter 11: Now

Loved the part about Logan turning on a bit of the old charm for the ladies at the school. Sigh, tough first day of normalcy for both of them, and poor Logan. He's got so much going on, so much to worry about. It's really interesting how Marie is in *his* head, instead of the other way around. It makes me wonder if he actually is losing his mind, or there's something else at play. The "twice" comment, so sad! And I love the last line: "This: his fucking night song." Great line. Excellent chapter, as always, can't wait for a "Then" chapter! :D

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you! I'm glad there were parts you really like! Your comments are always so kind and encouraging!rn

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