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Oooh... this is juicy. This line: “A word of warning,” he said. “Never run from a predator, Marie." Genius! I've been writing so damn much I forgot how f-ing wonderful it is to read.
Author's Response: *Grin* Juicy is what I was aiming for! I'm glad that I'm sucking you in (figuratively, of course), like you have done so with me in "Fray"! (Aaaand there's an example of some not so good writing...)
So much confusion for poor Rogue. Great chapter! Scary and cool. I was relieved when Logan finally showed up. Creed's bad side is definitely repulsive.
Author's Response: Must not be a coincidence that Creed rhymes with "creep"! :D I love it when Logan shows up too. Thanks for the review!
Chapter 3 pretty please?!
Author's Response: Soon; I think tonight! Finishing up a final polish :) I haven't forgotten about this, or No Sanctuary. I wish my day-job would cooperate and just let me do this all day :/
Wow no better way to start than with a Sabretooth Vs Wolverine fight.You set up an interesting scenario, the school is destroy and victor was a good guy in the other world? is there other world lacking a wolverine like this one is lacking a Rogue?
Banter between Creed and Logan was great, I like a psychopathic victor.
A slight nit pick on the otherwise great fight scene, the position of Wolverine's forearm and claws, if its the same arm with the claws in victor's should that position would not give Logan much leverage, unless you meant his other arm, which would work well, but combined with ripping the claws out it was a tad bit confusing which arm was where.
The dialogue between Rogue and Wolverine was fun, looking forward to figuring out this new world along with Rogue
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm new to writing fight scenes so the feedback is definitely helpful. There's going to be lots of fun stuff coming up which should reveal some additional information about the worlds we're dealing with. :) Cheers!
Seriously loving the concept and the direction this story is going, I hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! I can't wait to get this one out; I love where it's going (in my head so far) :D Cheers!
Oh wow, what a wild chapter. I'm anticipating rogue getting a lot more confused in future chapters, especially when she runs into this timelines remy, something I can't imagine will make Logan very happy :( excited for more. This is brilliant!