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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2016 9:43:16 PM Title: Auld Lang Syne (Times Long Past) I

Your writing styles has a nice flow to it. And I always like a ensemble cast story.
While Gambit, and since the movie Deadpool need no introduction. I think it would be even better reading if you introduced the character that don't appear often in Rogan fics, after you listed the Howling Commando's I had to go wiki them, and it kinda broke the pacing of the story for me.

You did a nice intro for Victoria in the beginning and Jackson in the scene with Xavier. Something like that would've been great when you introduced the commandos.

Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I got excited about Obstrepat, otherwise I would've intro'd Ava and Danny properly. At some point, I'll cover their meeting.

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2016 3:33:17 AM Title: Auld Lang Syne (Times Long Past) I

Ooh, great update, thanks! Lot going on, had to read it twice to absorb it all. Excited to see what will come next! :)

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