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Your writing styles has a nice flow to it. And I always like a ensemble cast story.
While Gambit, and since the movie Deadpool need no introduction. I think it would be even better reading if you introduced the character that don't appear often in Rogan fics, after you listed the Howling Commando's I had to go wiki them, and it kinda broke the pacing of the story for me.
You did a nice intro for Victoria in the beginning and Jackson in the scene with Xavier. Something like that would've been great when you introduced the commandos.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I got excited about Obstrepat, otherwise I would've intro'd Ava and Danny properly. At some point, I'll cover their meeting.
That was strange and interesting, can you please perhaps clear up the family tree a bit for me. This is what I got so far Victoria is Victor Creeds daughter but also Logan's sister. In the Movie verse Victor Creed is Logan's half brother, I going to assume that is not the case here. So Logan and Victoria share the same mother? Unless Victor is Logan's father also?
Very interesting so far.
Lol, rogue skydiving and screaming in Logan's ear. Ouch!
Yeah, that was me who said creepy, not sure why, guess it was just the way it felt when I read it the first time. Didn't mean anything bad by it!