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Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2016 7:37:25 AM Title: Chapter 6

Good to see everyone wising up to their relationship (I'm assuming they haven't actually started having sex yet, I don't think you would have deprived us of the smut!!) curious to see what impact the trask stuff will have on the story, if any. Hope more soon!

Author's Response: Can't say that a relationship could be kept secret for too long there. No depriving of smut, that will be next week. The Trask stuff is a couple of chapters off, if it will let it's self be written. Thank you.

Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2016 12:02:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

Neat, a new POV, and its Scott. I like how you portrayed the relationship Logan and Scott have, it's not too friendly and is base around mutual respect. They seem to have a good understanding of each other probably from years of working together.

Very cool seeing how Scott and Emma is interacting, their relationship seem pretty professional but has a hint of something more. I like that Scott purposely put blinders on regarding Logan's personal life. I venture to guess that he probably learn the hard way not to mess with Logan's private life?

Love the expanding cast POV, looking forward to seeing exactly how Logan and Marie got together and more of Scott and Emma.

Author's Response: Thanks. I just can't view Scott and Logan's relationship too far from this standard. And I don't know if I got Emma and Scott right from my tad bit of comic reading on them. Not many people are brave enough to mess with Logan's private life. Hopefully the next chapter will answer some questions.

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