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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2016 10:50:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

When I first saw "Harder" and "Grip it harder"... anyway I'll get my mind out of the gutter.

Great chapter, addition of more background info on the world is great. And Wolverine giving one on one lessons? That's pretty big deal right? I don't think he would do that with just anyone.

Its great to see that Marie has such a read in Logan already, that she is pretty tuned in to his moods and habits.

The morning ritual scene was wonderful I like how she moved from "how embarrassing" to "you know what, I'm just gonna enjoy it."

A very touching conversation about Jean in near end, and the role reversal after.

There connecting more and more, can't wait to see where your taking this.

Author's Response: Heh, you weren't the only one with their mind in the gutter.

In this world they are more in survival mode and lessons haven't been going on. But Logan being Logan, someone under his care isn't going to remain helpless. :) Close quarters lead to people knowing one another far quicker than normal.

Again close quarters, why fight it. Or at least I figure that was where Rogue was at and since she was in tune with Logan she knows how to keep things moving forward instead of letting things go moody.

Thanks. There are a few more chapters before they really connect. ;)

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2016 3:27:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

Love the update, was wondering where Jean and professor X fit into this universe, so thanks for including that! Love their dressing and undressing ritual too, definitely don't blame rogue for keeping her eyes open! Can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thank you. Nope, can't blame Rogue one bit.

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2016 3:10:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Aww, sweet he trusts her enough to tell her about the past with Jean, loved this part, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, Logan's days are number where Rogue is concerned.

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