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Reviewer: Jolie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2016 12:52:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loving this story

Author's Response: <# Thank you.

Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2016 11:40:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter can definitely see thing moving along. Great character interactions, I really like Marie unconscious associate her and Logan's relationship to that of her mother and father, as opposed to say, her and her father.
Good to see Logan is not that annoyed at her antics of course he just returned from fighting so he could have worked an frustrations out already. Hank having a sweet tooth was really interesting. And the green coats is very sweet now they just need to go on a trip in the camper.
I really like this domestic Marie, once again I like she immediate think of there relationship as a couple. Hell its like there a couple already but neither of them noticed yet, well I think Logan just started noticing something.

Wonderful read more please.

Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, I'm not ready to explore a father - daughter relationship for them.
Logan might be used to letting things like that roll off his back since he does know Jubilee here. Hank and twinkies go together like, well like Hank and twinkies. No road trip this time. :( They can both be boneheaded when it comes to realizing they are already in couple mode.
There are quite a few more chapters to go still. :)

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2016 7:59:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

Such a sweet way to thank him, even if her hands on his body are going to cause him further turmoil, lol. Love the chapter, the twinkies and green coat were a lovely addition!

Author's Response: <3 Sometimes spur of the moment care is the best. Hank needs love too. :)

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2016 3:49:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thank you for another amazing chapter of this fine story, so good to read it, especially on a Monday, when fanfic is so very much required;) brilliant to see them getting more hands on with each other (well, her with him anyway, but I'm sure there will be more touching to follow...)
Excited for more, can't come soon enough!

Author's Response: Glad I could brighten your Monday. :) You knew they couldn't keep their hands to themselves for long.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2016 1:52:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

Aw, love her looking after him like that at the end, and the green coat was a neat touch to the story :) looking forward to more and how long Logan can keep himself in control!

Author's Response: Thanks. I can't resist Rogue trying to take care of Logan. Logan will have a few more chapters before his resolve will melt.

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