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Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2016 9:19:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loving storyline so far, incredibly eager for more :) hope Logan doesn't keep those lecherous thoughts of his locked up too tight!

Author's Response: Thank you! There is smut in the future.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2016 4:42:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Aww, these two are off to a good start :) curious to see how them rooming together will go (I have smutty expectations, but I figure it may take a while to get there, hee) great fic, can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thank you. We will get to the smut eventually. Hopefully I will get back into a regular posting schedule with this one.

Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2016 10:54:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sites working yay,

Very interesting start I'm intrigued right away, you manage to emphasis the difference from the usual world with several well placed sentences.

The state of the mansion, the absence of the professor, Scott, aging from stress, are great away to mix description and exposition.

The sense of desperation is very palpable, from the fact that kids comes with combat experience, to the overcrowded nature of mansion now.

So far Marie and Logan seems to be there usual self, physical attraction is there, excellent.

Loved the scene when she first saw his room, brings me back to the camper scene in the movie. Logan is going to be a gentleman and let Marie have the bed right?

Wonderful beginning to a new story looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Praise be Devil Doll for figuring it out!

Hopefully I'll be able to keep that up as we learn a little more as time goes by. It is one big mash up of several ideas from the comics.

Yep the attraction is there and will slowly be built on. I'm glad the room scene came through and reminded you of the camper scene. Logan will not be giving up the bed, though he might be willing to share later on. ;)

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2016 5:39:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, welcome back wrfa - unless it's just that you have the magic touch? Lol. So giddy to see a new fic from you, and it's going beautifully so far, your AUs have always been brilliant, so I'm looking forward to see where you go with this! Excited for more :)

Author's Response: It's nice to have it running at full speed again. Not my magic touch, the credit all goes to Devil Doll.

Thank you. :) There will be smut eventually, just so you know. (I didn't expect to put it up so soon, but needed to check the site. An update on here or AO3 might be a little ways off.)

Reviewer: Jolie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2016 10:53:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ooh! I love this different approach! Can't wait to see what happens next! (and hooray for the site working again)

Author's Response: Thanks. This one is a longish one, so it might take some time. (Three cheers for Devil Doll's genius.)

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