Wow I just want to hammer some sense into Logan's thick metal skull after reading this.

Overall I think angst level is just about right, not too melodramatic. Its nice to see Rogue on the prowl and going after what she wants, and like many teenagers (at least I think she is still a teen, 18-19?) she is not quite sure what exactly she wants and how to get it.

She made a miscalculation and it seems to me she has realized it. Hopefully the pain she feels from this one mistake will not discourage her from her goal.

I am looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Author's Response: Hah, sometime Logan does have a very think skull. Don't worry he comes to his senses soon enough.

Angst is not my thing, so I tend to write it small doses. It makes me happy to know that it didn't come across as melodramatic.

In this Rogue is 18 almost 19, and hasn't thought this out as completely as she hoped. The next part is from Logan's pov so we don't get to see her reasoning, but no she hasn't been discouraged. Rogue just realizes that she has to go about it a different way.

Thank you.

A fic to make the heart ache! Poor rogue :( had to double check this story wasn't "complete" if it had been I really would be in pieces. Curious to see what'll be next and how much more angst you'll inflict on the poor girl...

Author's Response: *nods* There is a second part where they go about fixing things. Not too much more angst, my little heart couldn't take that. Thanks for the comment.