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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2016 2:48:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for pointing me to the prologue cleared quite a few things up for me.

This chapter felt like the climax of this of the story at least for Logan. Its nice to see him more adjusted to TTL and Some heartfelt realizations on his part.

Coming to the conclusion that this Marie is the one he loves/has always loved.

Normally I would say this is the point where the rug is pulled out from the happy couple. I really hope that is not the case.

Oh and poor Wolverine and his vaunted stamina, that was really, really unexpected, and love how his kinda just wilted afterwards. Marie handled it like a champ though, what a gal.

Author's Response: Logan is always a realist and he knows you can't live in the past. He adjusts as necessary and moves forward as best he can.

I'm not a rug puller. :) In fact my problem is usually finding the short cut to the happy ending and taking it. So the next two chapters are more about him settling in and finding some balance.

What better way to show that Logan is not where he wants to be than to have him take a hit in the stamina department. Marie handling it any other way wouldn't have been true to who she is here.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2016 1:35:07 PM Title: Chapter 9

HOT! And really quite fun too, such an awesome chapter!!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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