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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2016 2:24:42 PM Title: Chapter 8

This chapter is well structured, starting off with more insight into Logan's mind and circumstances/ Then moves seamlessly into Logan and Marie's expanding relationship.

Their comfort with each other really shows through, Marie is like a lighthouse in a storm for Logan. speaking of which. Nice job on showing how distraught/resigned, Logan really is right now.

I really like how Marie also get positive reinforcement from her time with Logan, especially regarding her comfort with her body and mutation control.

Finally I would have expected Marie to be a bit more reluctant about their outdoor activity, but I can definitely see it as a spur of the moment thing, given the circumstances.

Author's Response: Even though Logan was playing along to get out in ch 4, not everything is smooth sailing yet. I like your analogy of Marie to a lighthouse and I tried to make her lightheartedness a grounding factor for Logan.

Marie has some growing of her own to do, especially as she isn't far from the runaway that she was.

With all of this being new to Marie, can easily she where if they had been inside and Logan had wanted to go outside for that sort of activity she would have refused. But spur of the moment doesn't always give you time to ponder. :)

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2016 4:15:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

So sweet, I'm wondering if they will face any angst before the end of the story or if it's all good times and smut from now on! (Won't complain either way)! Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thank you. *heavy sigh* I am just not an angst girl. My one talent seems to be finding a way to turn possible angst into something happy way too soon. :) But there is more smut on the way, if that helps.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2016 9:09:22 AM Title: Chapter 8

Mm, that was beautiful, so very very passionate. Love reading that first thing in the morning!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. *beams at the mention of beautiful*

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