Wow when I said things were progressing rapidly I didnt expect Logan to just blow past second base in one go. The erotica parts was well written, I like Logan's struggle between his need and his concern for Marie. I saybthis alot but the small scenes really made this chapter, especially the part where Marie voluntarily close the distance between them both figuratively and literally, that was a great moment. Also the reveal that Marie might be more isolated at the school than I first expected.

And last scene about the kiss, could't help but smile about that.

Author's Response: Heh. I should probably start putting a note at the beginning of the stories in this series that they all are a different timeline possibilities flowing from Subcutaneous Severance (prologue). I sometimes get lost in my own little world and forget that people are not mind readers. Logan blew past second base because he thought he was still in the prologue timeline where he and Marie were together. I'm always perplexed about how much to tell the reader of the world going on in my head or if it telling that will matter to the story as a whole. I was envisioning that the new timeline was a much shorter span of time then the one Logan came from. A year at most for Marie as opposed to Logan having know her for years.

My beta used her pointy stick to get me to beef up that kiss scene, so I will pass along the thanks. ;)

Love that, more of that kind of action please! I kinda love that she isn't experienced, and that it would be her first time with Logan if/when they get that far...(not that it would have killed the fic if she had been experienced, it's just a nice touch that she isn't...) hope more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I went back and forth about the idea of Rogue being inexperienced and finally decided a lack of experience fit better with this particular incarnation of Logan. Just a few more chapters of them getting closer. :)