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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2016 4:18:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

Logan and Marie interation is great as usual. Seems obvious she had feelings for Logan for quite some, and seems like his recent declaration of love spured her to end her relationship with Bobby. While Marie said it was a long time coming, I think it would have gave the breakup more impact if there was little scenes of their relationship unraveling before it got to this point in this chapter.

Author's Response: I understand where your coming from on making a bigger impact if I had shown more of Bobby and Rogue's relationship before this chapter and I did struggle at first with how much to include. In the end I decided I wanted their relationship to go out with a whimper, indicating that Rogue's friendship with Logan had a greater impact on her life. As RogueLotus, my beta, said "The lack of mentioning Bobby prior kind of reflects that in a way."

Thank you and I will keep that advice in mind for future stories.

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2016 5:31:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

Kinda sad these chapters are so short, but a lot of cool stuff in here, a bad boyfriend dumping and comfort, what's not to love! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks! They are kinda short, though they do get longer later. Hmm...since I'm getting writing completed on other projects maybe I should put up the next short chapter. Okay I'm a push over, I will do that tomorrow.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2016 9:53:33 AM Title: Chapter 5

Ha, suck it ice boy, always good to see rogue choosing Logan over him. Sweet ending to this chapter, now there's definitely no reason for them not to become even more intimate :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Poor Bobby, he is just so annoying. ;) As soon as Logan is sprung, next chapter, they will be on the right road to a relationship.

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