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[Report This]Date: 06/22/2016 10:41:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like how you emphasize Logan's disorientation. Logan himself seem unsure of what actually happens.
Also it seems TTL's Logan is perhaps more isolated than OTL's Logan with only Marie visiting him of her own initiative.
The character interaction is great. I love how Marie know the lights bugged Logan and turn it down for him, even though Logan pretended not to care.
Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted Logan's to have problems coming to terms with the separate timelines.
Logan is always portrayed as such a loner, I couldn't see others coming in for anything but a quick visit.
It's always the little things that give away how well to people know each other.
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2016 12:52:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
I *love* that she can't stay away, some things never change!
Author's Response: *nods* Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2016 3:10:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
So sweet she isn't totally scared away after last time, love how she's taking care of him! Looking forward to seeing more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Rogue just can leave him, not when he needs looking after.