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Oh, God, what did they do to Logan? I'm a sucker for tortured, lab-rat, recovering-his-mind Logan. Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks!
There is a compounded problem with his lab time here. Whatever went on with Logan it was decided to drop him in this cavernous hole for sensory deprivation to really break him. Then somewhere during that time traveling Logan wakes up to this sensory deprivation and I'm thinking is there for a couple of weeks, one of which the lab has been shut down to minimal operations. So he went from some kind of torture to break him, to the sensory deprivation which went even worse with no real meals or sounds from about for the last week or so. This led him to not necessarily being broken but he was hallucinating and talking to the Rogue he left in the other timeline.
I don't normally like first person stories. But the way this story has been setup is very interesting. I love that it has minimal exposition and enviromental description. A rattle Logan would not really be pay attention to those things anyway. Instead the focus is on dialogue and character interaction. Really makes it feel like I'm in Logan's head. Great read, I'm really looking forward to see where this story goes.
Author's Response: I understand the hesitation with first person, it still isn't my go to style, so thanks for sticking with me. I like to think this is Logan's survival mode, only processing what is necessary. I'm glad you are enjoying it and hope the first person pov doesn't derail the rest of the story for you.
Cool, new fic! Great start, dark and sad, and I'm completely hooked, bring on chapter 2! (When you're ready, lol)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Ack, ch 2?!? :) Sorry, couldn't help myself. All 12 chapters are complete and I will try to update once a week.
Omg! This is amazing and kinda crazy and I just need more!!
Author's Response: Thank you! More will be on its way next week.
One hell of a way to start a story, kinda hot, very sad, very awesome. I'm so looking forward to seeing more!
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you, it's nice to hit hot, sad, and awesome all at once. The story is done, so I'm hoping to update on a regular basis.