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[Report This]Date: 04/29/2016 7:03:43 PM Title: Chapter 6: What to know
This chapter is quite melancholic and sad. I feel so bad for Rogue. I liked the conversation between Kitty and the Professor; it was really touching. I wonder what the Phoenix is up to? What does she want with Marie? What will happen when Marie finally comes to?
This is a gripping story and I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Hello, thank you for your review. I haven't been able to update in a while, but i definitely will by the end of this week. I'm trying to develop the plot in a way that won't make it ridiculously predictable or sloppy so it's quite difficult to write since I'm very aware of my grammatical mistakes...but yeah lol thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2016 3:49:55 PM Title: Chapter 6: What to know
That bit at the beginning with rogue trying to help the little girl falling from the swing had me bawling. So emotional. I'm scared what else Phoenix has in store for her :(
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed that. I found that part quite...melancholy, also. And as for Phoenix...will it irritate you If I leave you guessing? lololol
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2016 8:25:50 AM Title: Chapter 6: What to know
So damn good, the bit at the beginning - purgatory, written so well. I really liked the scene at the end with kitty and the professor too. Hope more soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I wasn't really keen on how I wrote this chapter felt like I'd jumped (if you know what I mean)
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2016 5:06:03 AM Title: Chapter 6: What to know
So awesome:)lot of creepiness and sadness in this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens when rogue awakens.
Author's Response: Question: How do you like your fairy-tales? ;P