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Reviewer: Jahunta4974 Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2016 9:00:02 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Beginning

Wow! That was scary and gross and freaky and totally awesome! I read it twice and I STILL have no idea what's going on, but I cannot wait for more! Don't keep us in suspense!

Author's Response: lol Thank you, and thank you for reading. I've had writer's block for a while, but I think I know where it's going now! Your comments are really helpfull :)

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2016 5:55:55 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Beginning

I had to read this twice to fully process this part, and as a result, I think I'm probably going to have nightmares! Brilliant, hope the next part isn't too far away!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2016 4:40:22 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Beginning

That was so so great, but incredibly freaky - not that freaky is bad, lol. Really looking forward to where things go from here. Loved seeing this story back!!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2016 4:11:10 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Beginning

God, this was good, freaky me but good - and I'm so happy you were able to continue this, hope it won't be so long till the next part!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading! This chapter gave me the creeps too, whilst I was writing it lol.

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