If the story had ended in the last chapter I would have been very Happy. So this chapter is kinda like icing on the cake. Speaking of sweets, I missed the chocolate reference in the previous chapter, very interesting way of admitting her feelings.

I see this chapter as kind of a victory lap to celebrate Marie and Logan getting back together. Lots of wonderful scenes. The mall scene with Jubilee is awesome, made me wonder why the mall scene was cut out of the X-Men Apocalypse movie. Jubilee is a fun character to read about, she possesses such a frantic enthusiasm. Shower scene was great I remember them taking about Marie shower not having enough space for additional "activities". Its great to see Marie integrating into the mansion, getting friends and finding a home.

The final "I love you" is the cherry on top of the icing on top of the cake. Very enjoyable story. I'll be browsing through more your back catalogue while I await more of your stories.

Author's Response: Mmm…cake! :) I couldn't let it go without a true happy ending.

In a way, I'm glad that the movies never really developed Jubilee. They would mess up her character and we'd be stuck with fixing something awful.

Have to throw in a shower scene every now and then. ;) Plus, it seemed like the most spur of the moment place for Marie to finally say those three little words after she feels comfortable.

Thanks again. *thinks a minute* As a warning, there are two angsty stories of my in the archives with no resolution/happy ending.

*applauds and whistles* just a great ending, I'm going to be rereading this story a lot! Any more coming to the series or was it just a two parter?

Author's Response: Aww shucks, thank you! RogueLotus and I have passed a bunch of ideas back and forth. So I can't guarantee that there will be a story right away, because there are more ideas than time. Man, I just need to get organized for writing this coming year.