Reviews For Lay Down My Heart
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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2016 6:44:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

Another great chapter, kinda tough to read. I tend to skim the angst parts normally but for a review I have to pay attention.

Actually got pretty angry when I thought there was third party in the mix, glad that cleared up quickly, getting another person involved during a rough period in a relationship is just the worst.

It was very fun to see Marie work through her emotions. I would have liked to see a bit more of Logan. But the crux of the problem lies with Marie so it was for the best.

The line about plotting Jubilee's death was great as is the confusion Marie felt when Jubilee actually wants to get her and Logan together.

Glad to see Marie finally admitting her feelings.

Great read.

Author's Response: Sorry about the tough read, but I had to take it slow to fix it properly.

A third party in a relationship is bad, but it felt true to how Jubilee would have initially been perceived as she rushed in to help out. We didn't see more of Logan because he was not talking to me. He refused to have any real input until I was going to fix things. :D

Jubilee has a heart of gold and really does care despite her flippant manner.

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2015 7:53:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ooh, plans - can't wait! Love that rogue has some supporters!!

Author's Response: *nods sagely* Yes, indeedy there are plans. I don't think Rogue was expecting any supporters, but it works out in her favor.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2015 8:00:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

Hmm, with jubilee and kitty in the mix now, I think my hope for wolverine and rogue just went up a notch! Cool part!

Author's Response: ;) Happy ending is on the way.

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