Reviews For Lay Down My Heart
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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2016 10:51:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

Another very focused, tight and brisk chapter, things as are moving at quite a pace.

The domestic scenes are great, love the scene where all the concession Marie made to let Logan into her life and space is shown. She care though perhaps not as much as Logan needs

Also this is one of the few Marie's I've read that doesn't like hockey.

Great to see crafty Logan make a come back and approaching the "problem" from different angles.

The final scene on the couch is heartwarming, her fascination with his hand and especially the claws must mean quite a bit for Logan.

And its great to see that this time around the touching reassurances offer by Logan is emotional rather than physical.

Seems like a storm is coming, I shall brace for the gusts of angst.

Author's Response: Ack! I kind of got behind in responding, sorry about that.

In this story, someone wanting to be with Rogue is so totally out of her realm of experience that she doesn't know how to handle it. Not every gal can be a sports fan. :)

When writing this I felt that Logan was trying everyway he could think of (though we may not have seen it in print) to get her to connect with him. He can see by Rogue's fascination with his claws and back story that she cares. However he has come to the end of his rope on forcing her to recognize her feelings.

Yeah, sorry about the angst that follows.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2015 2:10:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hmmm, now is Logan giving up with rogues starting to feel? These two need to get on the same page!! This was an amazing part, so sexy and revealing :)

Author's Response: Too little, too late? Hang with me, they are going to make it. *blushes* Thank you!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2015 1:24:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

Aww, the ending of this chapter :( I'm really hoping rogue will get it together and look at the memories of the two of them together more!

Author's Response: Rogue will eventually get her stuff together. It will just take a little longer than we'd all like.

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