Reviews For Lay Down My Heart
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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2016 11:25:24 PM Title: Chapter 4

I didn't comment on Marie's peeking into Logan's head in the last chapter because I expected this chapter would be about her dealing with those memories.

But this is better, Marie obviously is sticking to her guns about no emotional attachments, and looks like Logan is finally realizing that.

Loving the way this Marie is willing to use all sort of tricks to get Logan in bed, and that line near the end, where she patted Logan's leg is just wonderful.

The way this chapter is structured, has a simple elegance to it. A limited geographical area, (well inside a SUV really) a brief time frame, and great character interactions.

Enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response: When I wrote this, I had a clear vision that Rogue thought she would take Logan's memories like everyone else’s. Take a peek, sort through it, find what she needed and discard the rest. She wasn't prepared to deal with all his feelings/thoughts about her, therefore when she saw how much he cared she didn't want to deal with it.

On the other hand, it took Logan some time to realize she wasn't going to come around. In the beginning he concentrated on the things that made the two Marie's the same person to him and found out that there was one profound difference that he wasn't prepared to deal with.

*blushes* Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2015 4:34:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

Can't say rogue doesn't know how to get what she wants! :D looks like they're both headed for a hard fall here though :(
Looking forward to whatever the next chapter brings!

Author's Response: :) Rogue know how to get what she wants, but as you've foreseen it won't work in the long term. I hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2015 6:21:55 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh rogue, not nice to torture Logan while he is trying to work! Great part, totally cringed in symptathy for poor Logan at the end there...

Author's Response: Rogue certainly wasn't playing fair and Logan is starting to see that there may not be a bottom to this hole they are digging.

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