Reviews For Lay Down My Heart
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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2016 10:28:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

I loved the scene where Rogue is working. It gave some great insight to her characters, and how this life has affected her. The scene allowed me to infer a lot about Rogue. She is a pro with years of experience, usually well informed, alert, distrustful, but she still cares, enough to work with possible adversaries to help out a kid.

Great line about her been selfish and that she wanted to help people. The empathy she shows is wonderful and demonstrate that the kind and caring side she shows to Logan is her true self, buried due to some harsh life experiences, but its still there. And Logan is slowly drawing it out to the surface.

I knew what Logan wanted since chapter one, he wanted his Marie. Their connection and sexual chemistry aside it was not clear what Marie wanted from this, it can't just be some good company and great sex. This chapter shows exactly what she wanted, she want to be true to herself and Logan's unconditional trust is the push she needs to start being who she really is.

She barely at the starting line, but this chapter puts all the pieces in its place.

Wonderfully done.

Author's Response: Poor Rogue. In this story she was desperately trying to shield herself from being hurt. But you're right that in working with this kid, we get to see a part of her she doesn't like to show others.

Logan knows that caring side is there and will try hard to make it show. The thing is it takes longer and hurts worse than he expected it to.

Rogue is very stubborn in this story and I suspect without that she wouldn't have held the course so long. She will have to hit rock bottom to understand what she wants from her life.

Thank you!

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2015 9:31:49 AM Title: Chapter 3

God that's so good, but so sad too :(

Author's Response: Thank you. There is still some 'sad' parts to come, so hang on.

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2015 12:10:17 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh rogue, running off (or going out of town for a job) is so not going to fly with Logan, but I'm interested to see how that'll go. Cool part, sad, and hot and deep...

Author's Response: Logan doesn't get a whole lot of say in this, but Rogue can't stay gone long. Unfortunately, we are still on the downhill side of this. Thank you for the nice comment.

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