Reviews For Lay Down My Heart
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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2016 12:27:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

A lot of nice developments in the relationship. I love how they seem to just settle in to a routine with each other, Marie might be in denial right now but the connection the two have is very much on display.

The dynamics between the couple is great. It great seem Logan on thr offensive trying is best to show that he cares without coming on too strong.

The jealousy discussion is wonderful, Logan might be possessive, but given his own history, it would be weird for him to be jealousy of Marie's past relationships. Not that emotions are always rational, but I think her rather cold tone when discussing Gambit helped to taper any rash reactions.

Maries struggles wirh her natural/instinctive reactions to Logan is fun to read. I like the tug of war between Marie's rational side and her emotional side, she obviously has some trust issues but she gets just so comfortable with Logan that she kinda has to startle her self awake to get a grip on the situation.

Author's Response: Rogue is going to take some time to get over the denial. Logan does have a tendency to go full bore when he had decided on a plan of action, so he is trying to find that balance here.

You're right. Logan isn't naturally one to harbor jealousy. I could see a possible fleeting glimpse, but nothing long term. And in this case Gambit was more of an acquaintance with benefits, nothing more.

Rogue did get comfortable with Logan, more than she had planned on. Her trust issues and emotional baggage she would prefer not to think about bite her in the behind at every turn.

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments.

Reviewer: Jolie Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2015 11:45:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love all your DOFP stories!

Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2015 6:51:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loving this, but can't tell who is going to end up more hurt in the long run, Logan or rogue (or me?!)

Author's Response: Thank you! <3 I can't promise none of us will get hurt.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2015 6:18:02 AM Title: Chapter 2

So good! Even if those lyrics put me in a weepy mood - naked wolverine fixed that right up though!!

Author's Response: Thanks. *blushes*

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2015 3:16:16 AM Title: Chapter 2

Ooh, nice to see more of this, hot, hot! Worried about the likely angst with rogue determined to not get emotionally involved and Logan having an opposing view! :(

Author's Response: Thank you! My betas informed me that I have written angst with the next four chapters, but I can give you a little hope that I love happy endings.

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