Reviews For Lay Down My Heart
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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2016 11:01:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

This chapter has been a joy to read.
3rd person my favorite

Overall it was interesting to see the change in dynamic between from the other Logan/Marie stuff I've read, where Marie is the more casually invested in the relationship to start with.

The chemistry between the two is great, I very much enjoy the scenes you are able to imagine between these two.

There are a lot of scene/interactions I enjoyed, if I had to choose.

The scene about her being an assassin, and the fact the Logan immediately discarded that possibility, really show how hopeful Logan is starting out. That despite Rogue having never been part of the X-Men, and grew up in completely different circumstance, he is still so sure of her.

Then there is the whole conversation leading up to their first time together, again. Love the quick reference to the movies. But best parts if how fast she was able to read Logan's thoughts and emotions like its second nature to her.

Also nice to see that this time the time traveling didn't mess with Wolverines stamina.

I'm actually pretty curious about this world, and would like a bit more exposition, but understandably this is a character story, and the exposition would just get in the way of the pacing.

Well written, great read.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Logan being 'unaware' is the norm for the pairing and I am guilty of that as much as any writer. :)

It is good to know that the chemistry worked from the very beginning, even with the differences in their characters. It was important to the story, I felt, that Logan and Rogue had an unspoken understanding of each other from the start.

Ah, yes Wolverine's stamina. ;) I can't always take cheap shots at the poor guy.

Exposition … once again I had the dilemma of how much to tell about Rogue's back story without derailing the main story. In the end I left little bits and pieces of her past and how it played into who she became, but not nearly all the ideas I had about her 'upbringing' made it.

Thanks once again.

Reviewer: DarkDragonfly Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2015 11:57:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

That chapter was way too short.

Not fair!

Author's Response: *nods* I know, hopefully I will have the next chapter up next week.

Reviewer: askita Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2015 12:34:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was very interesting. I hope I don't get my heart crushed! Update woman, I need more!!

Author's Response: <3 I love happy endings, so that is the plan as of now. I so need to get my head wrapped around writing again.

Reviewer: pleasuremaiden Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2015 5:35:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2015 3:42:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can see the angst in the distance, but I think I'm pretty much in the afterglow of this first chapter...just fantastic!

Author's Response: <3 <3 Thanks and you are right the angst is on the horizon.

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2015 2:59:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

So curious to see how their relationship is going to progress from here, especially considering her reaction to him knowing her name! Fantastic start - and I definitely appreciate the smut!

Author's Response: Thank you! <3 Ack, relationship development *crosses fingers* will take some planning and time.

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2015 6:24:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Damn...just what I needed before bed *fans self* - of course this will probably keep me up for a few extra hours! *love* seductive rogue. It's great to see more of this series, have really been looking forward to more ever since the prologue, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Sorry for ruining your sleep. ;) I'm glad you are enjoying the series *wrings hands nervously* hopefully it will be of the same quality.

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