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Reviewer: Nebelwerfer42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2016 6:39:59 PM Title: prologue: Subcutaneous Severance

I came to this form Pieces of Me, definitely put a lot of things in perspective. And speaking of perspectives 3rd person, yay!

Not too much exposition, enough to let me know the differences from the Movie, and good job in establishing a believable preexisting relationship.

Its clear what both persons want/need from this relationship and what both persons brought into the relationship, beside the usual combo of mutual attraction,lust,desire and passion. Not that its not there, just nice to see that they are more than their libido.

I'm looking forward to other alternate universes in this series

Author's Response: Yeah, this one does help in understanding Logan's motivations when it comes to Marie in the other story. I think you can tell that third person is my default pov.

I glad to know it came off well and I hoped it carried nicely into the series. Which the only other story published in this series is Lay Down My Heart. And it is in 3rd person also.

Reviewer: DarkFay Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2015 1:41:01 AM Title: prologue: Subcutaneous Severance

Interesting start! I look forward to your next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you. It might take a little while to get back to this as I have a lot of irons in the fire.

Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2015 12:30:16 PM Title: prologue: Subcutaneous Severance

Great start, very excited about this series!!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm excited to see what RogueLotus will do.

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2015 9:24:50 AM Title: prologue: Subcutaneous Severance

The summary for this series is already making me emotional *sniffs* but I'm loving, and so eager for more!

Author's Response: *nods* I like the idea too, hopefully it won't take too long to put something else up for the series.

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2015 6:12:21 AM Title: prologue: Subcutaneous Severance

Yay, new story/series! So curious, and impressed so far - I know this is going to be great (hopefully won't rip my heart out too much!)

Author's Response: Thank you. I won't rip your heart out, but I can't promise others won't.

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