Reviews For Collateral Damage
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Reviewer: Iamthemagicmaker Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2015 5:09:43 AM Title: Step Five: Mission Sucessful

Definitely dark!! But it's always a joy to see Logan and rogue back together:)

Author's Response: Dark is fun, this chapter was great! I'm working on the next!

Author's Response: Dark is fun, this chapter was great! I'm working on the next!

Reviewer: Killing_time Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2015 6:57:36 AM Title: Step Five: Mission Sucessful

Excellent part, rather chilling!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Goodkarmaplease Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2015 1:28:05 AM Title: Step Five: Mission Sucessful

You are spoiling us with these updates:) fab chapter, dark and fascinating. And yay indeed at them reuniting!

Author's Response: I'm enjoying writing it! Definitely dark, loved this one.

Reviewer: Feralbites Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2015 11:07:01 PM Title: Step Five: Mission Sucessful

He’d meant to take his time going through the warehouse, he really had but the soft whimper of pain and brought him to a full run through the rooms. What he found would have made any man sick to his stomach and Logan wasn’t spared that emotion

So queasy about what happened but I am glad to see the normal human/mutant side of Logan.

Logan spent a long minute just holding her while she cried. He wasn’t sure what had happened while he was gone, but he’d get it out of her later rather than sooner. Now he just growled softly to her and held her close to him, glad to have his mate back in his arms.

I had two favorite lines. LOL. I love the sweetness of their relationship.

Author's Response: *flails* I know right! Because I gave him the separate Wolverine personality that is very selfish and know that is going to play a role in the future, I decided to take some time to show him as a man and showcase his humanity. It's one of the things that makes up the Logan that we all loved from the movies, his soft spot for Marie and his humanity.rnrnAlso, I love the way they interact too. They are in such a good place in their relationship they're starting a family together consciously. I thought I'd remind everyone of how much they love each other. Plus it plays a huge role in this story as well.

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